Reviews for She's No You
Fan.Fiction.Love chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Aw come on Axel. There's no one else quite like you. Who could Roxas possibly like more than you? Cute story. I really felt bad for Axel even though he did act a little like an ass at first.
JustAnotherRando chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
(My name is JustAnotherRandomPerson it won't let me type it all in)

Akuroku, My favorite song, Soriku reference?

You my friend, have made my day :)
Splee chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
nya so kyoot c:

i love song fics

i loved this one c:

short, sweet, and to the point -

thank you for writing :3
Renn chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Aww! Jealous!Axel! I LOVED it! Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Really loved it, and Axel's references to Riku and Sora...
Tsukithemadhatter chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
yay! that was so sweet and so cute yay for you!
SugarCrumbs chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I like the beginning... not so much the ending...

I dun like dis part...

“Wait… you think that I’m in love with Namine? That’s why you’re so upset?” Roxas regained the ability to speak. “Axel… you are an idiot. I don’t love Naminé … she’s just like a sister to me. You need to stop making assumptions before you know all the facts.” He started laughing. “Who told you that?”

“Larxene. Woman’s got a tongue as sharp as her weapons. I really need to stop listening to her.” Axel replied. “So… there really is nothing going on between you and Naminé?”

They understanded each other and forgive and forgot too soon. Not dramatic enough T.T

and I wuz real exicted when I read up to dis part too...

“What I’m trying to say Roxas… is that I am in love with you.” Axel replied, his eyes piercing his best friend. The younger boy was speechless. He had no remark to make about this, none at all. Was this why Axel was freaking out? Because he was in love with him? Roxas just stared at Axel. “But you obviously don’t share my feelings, because you feel that way about Naminé.”

I thought there will be a big fight or something...
Kyoto-chan chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Jesse McCartney makes me gag [I tried to forget he was Roxas while playing] but this was a sweet little story. x)
eXnay chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
never noticed this before... but anyways, yeah it's cute but I'm more of a fan of his song 'Because You Live' this song annoys me actually, but you made it into an axel/roxas so for that I like it somewhat now. good job!
Onemoreparadise chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
I loved it naturally _

I loved the whole concept, and because Roxas has the same voice, I can almost imagine him singing it! I loved the last line. I don't like the girls in KH much, I love yaoi. Axel and Roxas belong together forever.

Lovely fic!
Darkelfqueen chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
omg i so loved it XDD you did a really good job on it. i loved the writing. Keep up the great work!

Love,ShinyaXDie
Shinigami's-Girl chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
I loved it! It was so cute! Good job!
jap0911 chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
OMG!

It's beautiful, I love the song too!

I love the last line Roxas spoke...

You're great! Keep up the good work.
Hillside Dancing On chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Thank you so much for writing this. All the people who've been thinking "Why the crap did he look so happy to be with Naminé? She didn't love him like Axel did!" needed a nice story to ease the frustration. Also, it was high time someone did an Akuroku Jesse-songfic. I'm downloading said song right now.
Mamotte Ageru chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Aw. Cute. I was wondering when someone was going to write with the song 'She's no you' in it. .