Reviews for Their Little Secret
Carley chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Very amazing

Though I don't know much about the characters I still had a sense of who they were and cared about them

You should write erotic ;D
SoLongAgo100 chapter 12 . 5/1/2007
hmm interesting end to the story i always figured those two wouldnt make it together but this was good great job cant wait for your sequal
me chapter 12 . 4/21/2007
perfect ending to the story. i wasnt expecting her to retire but it really was the best way to end it. i think my favorite lines woulda been- “That’s all I needed to hear Trish…it’s all I ever needed to hear.” John kissed her once more on the forehead. He lightly pulled away from her, their hands still entwined.

“But I’m not the one for you.”

i read that and it was like omg... thats all i thought i kinda thought maybe they'd b together but then i read but im not the one for you. loved it
SwEeT-rEgArDs chapter 12 . 4/18/2007
aw that was cute but sad too great story skye it was great and i'm hoping for the sequel as well maybe trish and john actually getting together cause in this story they seemed so meant to be well maybe not meant to be but they loved each other doesnt that mean anything? sadly not in this story lol but i still loved it great job hoping for the sequel!
muhahaha chapter 11 . 3/16/2007
nope not aloud to end here. please please please add more. i love to read this and i wanna hear what comes outta his guilt and all that. i love how its going but i'd like to see more
CMCE21 chapter 11 . 3/12/2007
Don't end it here! John n Trish should be together! I hate Mickie, she doesn't deserve to be with John! Plz continue this story and hopefully update son!
jrishilicious chapter 11 . 3/12/2007
great chapter there is no way u could've finished it there keep goin but with the pairing of john and trish
SwEeT-rEgArDs chapter 11 . 3/12/2007
bah! what are you talking about ending it here! silly girl of course i want more! write more! lol and update soon! lol yes i love demanding! lolz love yah Skye!
CMCE21 chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
She said she loved him! LOL. YAY! plz update soon!
jorrielicious chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
hey you need to be sure and put JOHN WITH TRISH and please do so and not the ugly little weird girl so please im begging u put john and trish they look better together
uknow chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
OMG AWESOME! almost getting caught in the hotel room. the whole randy vs john for the girl. whats not to love. its perfect the way u ended the chapter. the last sentence seems to linger in the readers mind. its staying still.
jorrielicious chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
hey you need to be sure and put JOHN WITH TRISH and please do so and not the ugly little weird girl so please im begging u put john and trish they look better together
SwEeT-rEgArDs chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
ya! you updated! lol great chapter i like the ending it just sets the course for so many things!
SwEeT-rEgArDs chapter 9 . 1/28/2007
dude that was great! update soon!...oo and thx 4 the vid you made 4 me well for both vids you made for me actually all 3? no 4? ANYways great chapter we'll talk later
CMCE21 chapter 9 . 1/27/2007
That should so be him! Great chappie. hope ya update soon
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