Reviews for Kaleidoscope
yourgreeneyes chapter 5 . 2/12/2008
I'm two years overdue, but it's an awesome chapter, and please update soon!
Blackangle2011 chapter 5 . 3/31/2007
finish the story
CosmicButton chapter 5 . 12/4/2006
This was really good

shame you stopped writing it
Maqie chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Love this story - couldn't review the last chapter - dunno why but I'm jsut writing here :b

Well I hope that you'll soon update even trough it's been over two month and you have started a new story, but I love love this story and hope to hear more of it soon :D

and I love Victor more then I've ever done before! He killed Brad Kern! He rocks! :D haha.
kk1189 chapter 5 . 8/29/2006
great story... please update soon:)!
Triqums chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
great!
BCDW chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
this has been a very good fiction so far. definatly the kind I like, and other then my own i haven't seen smilar stuff in the 'charmed' section. i hope you update soon!
PiperandLeoFan101 chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
Well taht was kind of short and to tell you the truth, it is the most boring chapter so far, no offense there's just not much going on. I'm sorry if i've offended you. I'm still going to keep reading though. I like this story just not really this chapter. It contained information and everything but like I said not a lota action. update soon
piper luva 4eva chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
I can't believe she's staying so loyal to her dad. Great, a bit short though. I can't wait any longer lol! Please update soon. x x x
sn0zb0z chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
Short but very good chapter. And I know what you mean about the line - had the same problem myself. Very annoying. Anyway please update soon!
sn0zb0z chapter 4 . 8/14/2006
Interesting chapter. Please update soon!
Triqums chapter 4 . 8/9/2006
continue please
heather1021 chapter 4 . 8/7/2006
it wasn't that bad. it was a nice chapter. keep writing.
xheart to thee chapter 4 . 8/7/2006
Nice chapter. It wasn't as good as I hoped it would be, I wanted big paragraphs of feelings etc. But I am sure i'll get that soon enough.

I did love this line '“Sorry man.” He muttered. “Take some advice. Don’t marry into an Italian family. The women are hell.”'. haha classic Cole line.
piper luva 4eva chapter 4 . 8/6/2006
that was great. I like the fact that thentables have turned and Phoebe now acts like the middle child. I feel sorry for leo getting stuck in the middle. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon. you heard trivium's new release detonation. it's brill lol. x x x
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