Reviews for Honesty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Had to go back and read this little gem! Love the sparring scene between Martin and John. |
![]() ![]() EXCELLENT! PLEASE, write a dating part, meet johns family part, twins part. |
![]() ![]() jealous jon. sooo cute. |
![]() ![]() whatr did I say..jealous john so good...love johns journey of self discovery..and his running away again adn again..and teyla not giving an inch after he spars with mark...lol.. happy that teyla works it out and goes to him...and just how happy they both are when it all becomes very clear... hugs making my way up hte stores to review the ones I didnt before hugs |
![]() ![]() ![]() another one..I cannot believe I didnt send a review the first time I read this,, have reread it heaps of time since.. love love jealous john..and this guy could talk himself out of the best thing for him...he deserved that hit from mark...lol..love when T told him he is always distracted... and so happy T went and found him and made a move..cause we all know J wouldnt..mores the pity... and love that little damn it form hte technician..too funny.. thanks again nd sorry I am late... hugs |
![]() ![]() ![]() A jealous John is actually quite a nice thing, especially when he doesn't even realize that he's jealous. Nicely done with a smooth transition into the two of them being together. And John so awkward with Teyla. He gets awkward with the ones that really matter, doesn't he? Good writing, kept everyone in character. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yaay! What a great chapter! Please write the dating part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o wow! What a great chapter again! you write so well! I'm glad Teyla told Martin how she felt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O no! To normal? I hope not! Doesn't Teyla notice anything? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Teyla! I think John should step up too and say something to Teyla! In that Martin was right I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gr that stupid Martin! I wonder what Teyla thinks about all this and if she really likes him! Poor John! I can't help but feel sorry for him, I really don't hope that she likes Martin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O great story! I love it! Hahah John had to make sure that he won't take advantage of Teyla hahaha yeah right! hahah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that this story revealed to John how he applied the firting limitationss to Teyla but nor for himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderful. John's jealousy is very vivid. I don't like thinking this guy could beat him in a fight though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! |