Reviews for Perfection
Taletha chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Very nice.
LapsusStili chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Wow, what a perfect look at their realistically imperfect relationship. I loved that he only says he loves her in their most intimate moments, but that she knows he truly means it and that its enough. Welcome aboard!
KleeNut214 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
This was great, nice job!
smacky30 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Well written. Interesting take on the relationship. Looking forward to more from you.
bidmis chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
wow!

this was extremely well-written and actually, kind of intense in a way that kind of sneaks up on you. that's probably a very incoherent and confusing review... sorry.

-i loved it.

keep writing!
Domo Arigato chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Short but very well written, especially for a first attempt. I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
n4trix chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
This is your first? WOW :) It's very beautiful and in character. Well done :)