|Reviews for Fever|
| Eclipse Shine chapter 4 . 1/9
"Zoro leaned forward as Luffy craned his neck upwards. Their lips met in a shy first kiss. Slowly Zoro's hand wound its way into his captain's hair and YANKED IT!
"Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!" Luffy screamed as he bolted upright "What was that for!"
Sanji smirk and released his hold from his captain's hair..."
I like that clever transition!
| Dragonslayer395 chapter 5 . 1/7
Hehe, forgot to log in... I already commented! The name should be the same! clumsy me
| DragonSlayer395 chapter 5 . 1/7
This was such an amazing story! I usually don't comment cos I'm a shy little donkey but I just had to tell you how great this was! I cried so muuuuuch when Luffy almost died in the last chapter and everyone was crying, so intense! ;-;
Anyway~ Loved the story! You're amazing!
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/31/2016
Aww it was sad but it ended with a happy ending!️
| kristina5454 chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
This was so cute and fluffy! I loved it!
| ShatteredBeliefs chapter 5 . 4/2/2015
I just love your story. It's so romantic! You make ZoLu to the cutest couple on earth.
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/28/2014
That was freaking hilarious! XD Yeah, it takes a lot to make me cry. Or express any emotion besides amusement XD
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2014
tHIS IS THE MOST PRECIOUS THING
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/26/2014
Thank you for posting this... It was beautiful to read :3
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2014
I am enjoying this... but I hate the romance part... so I'm not going to continue
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
That was so Adorable and Cuuuutttteee...!
That was understandable why the middle of the story became Ridiculous and Interesting! XDDD
That was more or less a Dream after all...!
But the witch was so Cool!
She kind of like Doctor Kureha!
I wonder if she actually was real or not... Fuuu
Whoa! If Zoro and Luffy didn't make up, Luffy probably would sick like in his Dream!
Even Sanji became worried...!
After all, Luffy was began to showed the sign of get sick again...!
I'm glad it sorted nicely done...!
That was CUTE!
I liked it!
I LOVE IT!
| ichigi111kurosaki chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
oh gosh, i couldnt stop grinning at the last chapters final two paragraphs! :D
| LyricoJ chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
Haha . The end was perfect . Kk but sure i dont expect its yaoi . . Even it nice to see luffy get sick
| r4ndomchick chapter 5 . 5/5/2013
That was excellent! At first I thought Zoro was too OOC but it it turned out really well.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
I love ussop in this chapter