|Reviews for A Practice in Persistence|
| oceaning chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I absolutely adored this; it really is an amazing drabble(s). :)
| mysterios chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
the strip game left scarring images.;)
| CurlyHairedDemon chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
8D that last one... that last one just about killed me
| chiharu-tanaka chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
OMG the last one pwned me! Amazing job in writing up 50 wonderful sentences for KiraHina! :D I especially enjoyed the last one, and the one where Kira gets a Bankai.
| spero spiro chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
The 1sentence challenge is one of my favorites on LJ, and this is a really delightful take on it. :) Kira is so awkward, and Hinamori is so oblivious... but it's *them*, and it's wonderful.
| wthkate chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
OMG! I love this SOO much!
Please Keep writing! :D
| freakwriterCHM chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
This was extremely good, I'm adding it to favs... wow, you wrote such a good fic... I'm amazed by this. Well done! I love this pairing...
| Mimiru.hack chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
This story was so good! I liked the way you wrote all the different pieces. I'd like to use these as a complete story one day(if that's all right).
| Riu Lin chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Wow. xD I loved how you kept the flow of your sentences- they were so catchy and romantic at the same time (of course, in some, hilarious). So fresh they are!
Ahh, you really must write more Kira/Hinamori fanfiction, Lucinda. ;_; I'm DYING for nice, good, well-written, flowy Kira/Hinamori fics.
| the.maljax.is.me chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Every single line captures these two so perfectly.
And I'm the one of the ten people in the world who love this pairing to death but that's okay!
| Modular Blues chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
The vignette style is refreshing, and I can totally see how the characters might behave under certain situations :-) Great job filling in the emotive aspects of the series.
| Swimming Bird II chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Argh! more! more! More kiraHina!
I love this! I LOve this!
Incredible! This is fic is so beautiful!
| Youkai Hime90 chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Even though I've only started watching BLEACH the idea of Kira and Momo as a couple really appeals to me! I've always adored your skills as a writer and each and every sentence was beautiful, heart breaking, and wonderful. My personal favorite? A deadlock between Sorrow and Valiant. Yeah, I'm a sucker for angst. But I also loved the imagery you used in Balloon and Jump. What can I say, I loved them all! _
| Outsane chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
Aww, some were sweet, and some were sad. Very, very good! XD
| Liz chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
This is really impressive. Im not even a fan of this pairing, but you managed to put real poetry into some of the verses (particularly Wonder and War). Keep writing, I hope I can keep reading!