This is toats worth my time! And I am seriously interested in it now

I love this!

Ahhh! I freaking LOVED this story so much! (You took up so much of my time and I lagged on the school work I needed to get done because I was too busy staying up all hours to read this story... oops XD) But what an emotional roller coaster... my heart hurts from over use! I loved this and thought it was very original though I was yelling at Roxas to stop being an idiot and for him to stop lying to himself and throw himself into Axel's arms XD gah! Now I'm wanting to run and go read the sequel nowwww! I'll blame you and the gorgeous akuroku when my teachers ask why my work isn't done XD I cant even explain how much I loved this story, thank you so much for writing this! ;w; oh the akuroku feels...!

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Awesome fanfic ever! I cried a lot when reading this. Good job

your awesome. i flipping love you.

Ok ive read this story plenty of times but its been a while since I last did so when demyx sang brothers I almost cried in front of all my friends :'( GOD DAMMIT!
Still love this story.

This story was amazing so sentimental but at the same time not so much! loved it but u cant stop here. though it may be to late now since this was 7 yrs. ago :( O well i tried...

Ecchi Roxas. ;)

Sooo goood why did you stop?! Talk about a cliffhanger! I loved this it was so well written. You should really write an actual book and try to get it published. 10/10

Firstly, I'd like to straight out say which points of the story irritated me.
fig. 01: The OOC. Naminé is a quiet, collected and docile teenager who enjoys drawing. Not some creepy fangirling stalker chick who listens to Shakira (or whomever. I reckon “Hips Don't Lie” was written by her, am I right?), and I'd probably wouldn't be surprised walking into her room at the abandoned Twilight Town mansion listening to Mozart or Beethoven.
fig. 02: The unprofessionalism. Although your grammar is highly acceptable, your author's notes aren't. Now, I shouldn't be reviewing on author's notes, however—yours contain zero-to-none grammar. This will result in readers being put off by the story right at the start. It's best for you to either correct them or erase them entirely.
Moving swiftly onto the positive attributes. The plot was written very well, albeit rushed at a few chapters, but you still managed to produce a fantastically well written story.
I was about to read your sequel, but I very angrily turned off my 3DS at the fact that you made it suddenly Roxas/Naminé, when Roxas was practically flaming her. (-_-)
However, you did provide amusement throughout the whole plot, and I commend you for that.
P.S: Naminé has an accent. If you're on a standard PC keyboard, I think to create an “é” is by holding Num Lock and pressing 0, 2, 2, 3.

Please post another chapter I LOVE it!

I am loving this already, I'm six year too late but hot DANG I am going to review the hell out of this and you author-person shall ENJOY IT.

But for now, I must sleep- Adieu, author, adieu

*Disappears in a cloud of smoke*

Oh. My. Gosh. This is litteraly the best story I've ever read! But now Axels gone... I'm so sad. The ending was sad. I almost cried at the end... I just, he's gone.

ahhhh! im literally stuffing blankets in my mouth to keep from screaming