Reviews for The Scorpion
Oxycoon chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Wow, a very nice story. As a fan of the Longest Journey series, I find this one quite good. Thank you :-)
AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
This was a very interesting piece. Nice Azadi POV on Kian's defection. Kinda worried about the "long, long ago" part. This mean the Azadi won? o.o

Still, cool story. :)
MaxManuka chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
frightening atmospheric
LadySerenade chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
omg..I loved it..your really good...I love how you incorperated Kian being taking away into the tale by saying the scorpian tainted him...that was genius! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Ignira of Esperon chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
O-that was really good. A wonderful interpretation of the final days of April Ryan! *claps*
skytten chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Loved it, hope you keep writing.