Reviews for The Kind, the Cruel, and the Psychotic
Thunderstorm101 chapter 9 . 11/24/2007
In real life, Karli's mom would have to pay the hospitle bill, even if the Fentons didn't want her to. The law requires it, even if the victim doens't want it.
Nubecula chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Sodium and water explode when they interact, but sodium isn't generally allowed to be handled by students under any circumstances, and the resulting substance is not caustic. Sorry wasn't more of a help. :C
neuv chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
Okay, this has probably been answered a million times but, you were describing someone who wasn't paying attention crossing the street, a driver who couldn't stop fast enough, and the poor pedestrian got hit. Also wasn't Karli's full name, Karli Tinyk? I am not sure. Anyways, great trilogy and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
darkflame1516 chapter 9 . 11/11/2006
aw, last chappie...:(

oh, Karli wrote that article...hey, how does she know about Danny's secret?

oh my god, he's paralyzed...WAH!

well, remorse is always a good sign...oh god, she cant see white on his shirt? his whole shirt IS white! darn, that CANT be good...

oh god...he's afraid of her, he's losing his mind, he's paralyzed...wow, he really ISNT having a good day, is he?

NO! it cant be the end...NO!

you MUST write the next part SON! and i MEAN it, i cant wait!

i still think Karli is cool, would like more details about HOW and WHEN she found out about Danny and why she wrote that article...

Please put up the new story as soon as you can, I'm now literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation...you're an awesome writer and I cant wait to read more...
darkflame1516 chapter 8 . 11/11/2006
hm...i dont mind swearing, or references to religion as long as its not trying to convert me...*lol*

oh, good going val! knock danny out a window, then pass out before you could call 911!

KARLI'S MOM HIT JAZZ?

aw, poor Danny! *huggles hurting halfa* (lol, all "h" words!)

omg, what happened to his legs? GAH! I MUST KNOW NOW!

...wait, theres one last chap to review...*sigh* only one left...WAH!
darkflame1516 chapter 7 . 11/11/2006
darn...wanted to know who ran over Jazz! but u are OH so good at suspense...

"Valerie wanted to pummel him for being the ghost kid, yet wanted to hug him for being Danny." - i LOVE this line...its like, awesome!

wow, i can just picture Val seething with anger...

AH! oh...my...god...*eyes watering*...Danny...*anger rising* HOW COULD VAL DO THAT?

although, i do kinda get it...she just gotten a huge shock, and now she's adjusting badly to it...but still...

wow...speechless again...u ARE good...(i'm rarely speechless)

i love those last two sentences too...:D
darkflame1516 chapter 6 . 11/11/2006
hey, hospitals are creepy...never had relative hit by car, but have had relatives in hospital...i share Tucker's phobia on a small level...i hate hospitals...

oh man! val's not gonna believe whats she's about to find out...

hm...that psycho's note seems like...like Karli might've written it...hm...

see, i knew Val wasnt ready...aww, she's crying...why do i feel pity?

wow, this is SOO suspenseful...i'm just glad that i have more to read...though i wish i'd remembered to review on time instead of shoving all my alerts in a folder in my inbox...
darkflame1516 chapter 5 . 11/11/2006
yeah, i bet i'm getting annoying at this point...but i liek to review EVERY chap of a story that i read (its just what i do) so...

aww, Lancer cares bout him...or maybe just Jazz his star pupil...or both...*shrugs* love the book quote btw, so in character...

AH! BG let it slip! AH! she's gonna figure it out now...oh, geez, SKULKER! he's so cool, in that creepy "i want to skin Danny alive" way...

aw, poor everyone...i hope Jazz will be allright...

aww, short chappie! oh well, makes it quicker to move on to more chappies! *grins*
darkflame1516 chapter 4 . 11/11/2006
...yummy chapters...

hm, wonder if its Karli thats in a hurry to get home besides Val...

OMG! JAZZ? never, NEVER saw that coming...wow...i'm like speechless...

wow, i hope its a dream, for his sake...that is like the suckiest day i could ever think of...short of him dying...

hey, i print things out with my laptop...u just have to have to hooked to a printer. and since its in her room on her desk, it seems likely she'd have it hooked up...

hm...i'm thinking Vlad wrote this article...

hehe, misplaced aggression...poor BG!

okay, i know that ur poll had to have been answered by now, but i wanna vote anyway so...i'd have voted for...b and a...which technically makes it e.

Let me explain...I'd have loved to see it (i know u prolly already wrote it, but this is how i'd have voted) that Val figured it out, when to confront him, but before she could get to the point, he broke down and told her...

but i like angst and hardships and stuff...:P

okay, ONWARD ONCE MORE!
darkflame1516 chapter 3 . 11/11/2006
yay, more reviewiness!

aw, Danny gets upset that Sam's missing...*sniff*

okay, either Karli is involved...or she's really weird...I like her! :D

*singsong voice* he he, Danny's in trou-ble! (u'll have to excuse my weirdness, its like midnight for me now...)

hm...yet more mysteriousness of crash-victim...hm...

finally, it clicked to Danny that HE'S the reason Sam and Tucker might be missing...geez, sometimes he is SO slow, huh?

HE HE! must be Sam, she said danny's cell number! YAY!

whoot! ONWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS!
darkflame1516 chapter 2 . 11/11/2006
wow...i cant believe i forgot about this story! i feel so bad now...but its good for you, now u get a bunch of reviews all at once! cool, huh? :D

oh, Karli is like me, mouth that just says whatever...lol!

wow...Karli is SMARTER than she seems too...caught the whole "set up Danny as bad guy" plan during the invasion...coolie...

LOL! i love her temper! ha ha, thats just what Val needs, a good b*-slap!

oh...the nurse is noticing Danny's behavior too...hm, seems like u got just about everyone SO close to figuring out his secret in this story...col...

hm...i think someone got hit with a car...might be Sam or Tucker...but since u have it saying "after school" and then retracing ur steps...i think might be Val or Karli...
Coolstra chapter 9 . 11/6/2006
That was so awesome! I read the whole thing today. I couldn't look away from the computer screen! Karli is an awesome character! How does she know who Danny is? Can't wait for the next one!

*faves story*
phantomshadowdragon chapter 9 . 9/30/2006
Wow, so Karli knows. Is she going to tell? Poor Danny. I hope Val can make up for her stupidity.
WriterGirl713 chapter 9 . 9/30/2006
Oh...my...God. Just let me tell you now, if you don't hurry up with the sequel, I'm going to turn villainous assassin and write it for you! No, I couldn't do that! The writing thing anyway... That wouldn't be any fun. Come to think of it, I couldn't kill you either, DARN! (Becomes equivalent of Hyde in Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde) I want MORE! NOW!

BTW, is Karli a foolish, but innocent, admirer, or is she a halfa too? She sure knows a bit about them. I love how you turned KCP into a mystery! But I hate you for the cliffies! Jk, I don't hate authors who update soon! :D PLEASE hurry up with the next installment. You've got me hooked and I'm high! Don't deprive me of my reading, I'm begging you!

-WriterGirl713
the last kiwi chapter 9 . 9/27/2006
Wow last chapter! Yay for you! Don't worry it was really good, your writing always is! I think that someone is going to have to file a lawsuit against Valerie, because that pretty much was attempted murder...hee hee hee...valerie's not feelin' the love right now...homicidal maniac... But anyways now after reading this chapter I'm going to have to say Karli isn't really evil, she's just seems kind of spacey. Just try expressing her quirks or characteristics more as the story goes on. Good luck with the sequel! I just have a few more words to say: Moose! Indian!

P.S. How's SOS going? High schools been pretty tough for me, so much homework and projects...no...
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