|Reviews for An Unexpected Coupling|
| Mavrixtrinkia chapter 12 . 4/1/2007
AWW! i love! so much better than that other ending! btw, i faved your "downfall" picture on deviantart! i have the same name there as well
| Sony89 chapter 12 . 3/24/2007
i like this story ;) very much... i can't decide what ending i like better though ;)
| akdjsodascnsc chapter 12 . 3/24/2007
You're an amazing writer holy crap! I'm from and holy carp lol I'm sorry I'm just..hey Unexpected Coupling ruled, I just finished reading the whole thing (I'm late, as we talked about before lol). Gotta say I prefer the fluffy ending, because I can picture this and then I can picture the 3 of them going back to their normal lives together but with Mugen having a little different outlook on things. Plus I liked it because it seemed more likely. The 'morbid' ending as you called it was also fantastic, Mugen got to be with Fuu even if it meant going with the Crow Men and I was glad to see he wouldn't suffer anymore and it was very angelic and fantasy-like. Anyway yeah, I had no idea you were such a fantastic writer and artist on top of it. Rawk on!
Also wanted to say the love scenes in the story were in pretty good taste. Sometimes I read love scenes that I think to myself "if you can't do love scenes, don't write them" but you are good at writing them and kept Mugen and Fuu both in character. I think you kept Mugen in character throughout the entire fic as much as *anyone* possibly could while still doing an awesome job at having him show he has affections for Fuu in his own idiotic, butthole way.
I was on the edge of my seat alot, wow. Humor, romance, angst, all tied together, in a flawless-Champloo kinda way (and very neatly, might I add). Things also seemed true to the anime/manga. Jin was in character too and not at all left out. I'm sorry for her death, but Kohza was a meanie lol.
There. Sorry for the long review. ;D
| purpleleemer chapter 12 . 3/17/2007
oh man, that's a great ending too!
| purpleleemer chapter 10 . 3/17/2007
oh my god...fuu died? how is that possible...? and right when mugen aditted how he feeled...
| purpleleemer chapter 9 . 3/16/2007
that does, in fact, go along wtih Mugen's "story".
I felt like crying just now...I don't know why, but i did.
| purpleleemer chapter 8 . 3/16/2007
wow, your story is so amazing..
| purpleleemer chapter 7 . 3/16/2007
kohza's being killed...by the man she loves nontheless...and mugen hasn't have much time left with fuu...will he say what he feels?
| purpleleemer chapter 6 . 3/16/2007
OH MY GOD! MUGEN!
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| purpleleemer chapter 3 . 3/16/2007
I think Kohza has gone insane, and not in the 'funny' scence. I think that she plans to kill everyone holding her and Mugen being together back. And, once Kohza gets to Fuu, I just KNOW Mugen will fight back, even if she is an "old friend".
| purpleleemer chapter 2 . 3/16/2007
omg! mugen is SUCH a bastard! and Kohza! don't EVEN get me started on her!
| purpleleemer chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Wow, that's probably the best pairing for a lemon and the best lemon I've read in a while. I even think it's better than my own...
| Anonymous Being chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Hello there. I too am a fellow author, and I have to say, I absolutely LOVED the first chapter. I'm on to read more. Good luck!
| DemonicXaliv chapter 12 . 2/24/2007
GOD the first ending was TOO damn sad!I like this one better