Reviews for Within the Pale White Light
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
A halo/naruto crossover
Shall I read it?
Is that Richard?
Okay, gotta read it now.

Thank you for sharing this.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/23/2016
The story got so boring now I can't help but want to leave now.. You had the potential but you fucked up with the constant " ow my ass is hurting and it's bleeding " shit. Seriously stop making melodramatic scenes that's too much of a constant change the fucking scenery for once. I know it's a city from the game halo but wtf? Your just going to bore us out with the same thing over and over again. Six times now.. The constant ow my ass shit with the characters isn't even interesting anymore. Idc if you want to improve or not I'm just going to leave you more than likely only have a small handful of accepting readers but it's probably only a mere 20 out of the amount of readers that exist here at fanfiction. If I'm right try to keep the story interesting with naruto basically using rasengan and what not and his overpowered shadow clone technique. And you had to ruin quite a bit with what most of us expected.. Plus naruto is dense not an idiot if you actually watched the series but apparently you either don't care for the readers or you just don't give a shit. Well cya I'm tired.. I have no hope for you..
tcd2017 chapter 17 . 6/20/2014
Fuck u finish the same story please
AsahinaTora chapter 17 . 2/13/2014
NOOOOO! *cries tears of blood* Where!? Why! *more tear of blood* This was fantastic. I love crossovers and I found this one in a forum recommendation, I didn't know what to wait at first, but when I started reading I couldn't stop.

I don't like to ready many Halo crossovers because the first was -*bang*bang*head shot*Turn left*bang*bang*head shot*. But then I start reading this, and to my surprise I see more plot than fight! I was so happy.

And you are to cruel. Finishing the chapter in this cliff and never updating again. I hope to see this completed someday.
Annaku chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
hello sorry to bug you but just wanted to let you know people are still reading your old stories and they would like to know if you plan on continuing them or if they are abandoned and should be taken off of favorites. thanks
Guest chapter 17 . 5/31/2011
Get off your ass and update!¬°!¬°PLEASE!
Spectre.of.Apples chapter 17 . 5/7/2011
Great story so far! Please continue!
Guest chapter 17 . 12/31/2010
i love the story, you have some great ideas my freind

keep up the good work
InuYasha's God sis chapter 17 . 10/12/2010
WOW this is one of the best cross overs I have ever read. My first Halo/Naruto cross adn I have to say it is inspiring and refreshingly creative. I'm sooo disappointed that this is the last chapter! It has been an amazing read.

Thank you so much

~Yasha's Sis
wigglewigglewiggle chapter 17 . 7/4/2010
Shitty ending! T_T
hickup chapter 17 . 5/30/2010
Oh my gosh what a cruel creul cliff hanger! Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can :) I really like your story
hickup chapter 10 . 5/30/2010
Payce D. Elui chapter 17 . 5/22/2010
Well this is pretty damn awesome! I know you haven't updated in ages, but it would be awesome if this story wasn't abandoned. If it is- thanks for the read either way.
shloop chapter 17 . 4/21/2010
This story is amazing!

The only real problem I've had is our constant misspelling of "too" (I'm going TO the movies. I have TOO many cats.)

ACK! cliffie! Why, gloria? why? I need to know what happens!

Will shkamaru prove to be an amazing tactician? Will the grunts learn to control their chakra? And what is the kyubii planning?

But it's been years since you added a chapter. You probably forgot about this... T-T
IAmABookDragon chapter 17 . 11/26/2009
Is whatever Kyuubi doing gonna save them? Update soon please!
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