Reviews for Momiji
Amber chapter 6 . 11/10/2014
I can't believe you did that. Having us see Momiji's father's feelings after listening to Momiji and Haru talk, and then have him reject Momiji is wrong. He had soft feelings for his son when he was listening to his father. What the hell?
TheBigBadWolf101 chapter 6 . 3/1/2014
Munchkin Guuurrl chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
This was amazing! Despite I never liked Haru X Momiji, i loved the story line behind Momiji's family and that dream were both amazing. TT I cried reading the beginning of this... MOMIJI IS MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER AND WILL ALWAYS BE! - YAAAAY!
Momiji roleplaye chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
I think it has a lot of potential some advice is use more details like facial expressions surrounding area's and stuff.
VttR6515 chapter 5 . 3/2/2012
0-o...maybe I should stop reading fanfics?oh well I'll pretend this is the anime version...rin isn't in the anime version...
LostGryffindorFoundSlytherin chapter 6 . 4/15/2008
Kasaki Kihoya chapter 6 . 9/19/2007
That ending was total awsomness! It was so sweet, angsty, fluffy, yet with a touch of innosence! Great work!
loretta537 chapter 6 . 9/6/2007
That was so sad, I couldn’t stop crying through the whole story.
heartslogos chapter 6 . 8/13/2007
-resisting urge to kill Tsunada- must not kill company owner dude...4get this...-stabs Tsunada to death- -cackles evily- THAT'S WUT U GET FOR HURTING MOMIJI-KUN! ] lol anyway wonderful story! except the evil Tsunada dude...
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 6 . 5/8/2007
Ok, so in the end Momiji's father was the 'bad guy' and his mother repented...that's was a bit twisted if you ask me. But anyway, I like the fics were Momiji gets to really be Momo's older brother so...I won't take that other detail into consideration. _
TheDevilMayCry chapter 6 . 10/15/2006
Well I liked it, despite its shortness! :D
animecrazy6 chapter 6 . 7/31/2006
YAY! you know i don't know his parent's names either. well this story made me happy. i was really really really mad at my brother for breaking my cell phone. anyway. YAY!im really happy well cool story.
LadyMelieka chapter 5 . 7/19/2006
Heyya... me likey... me likey muchly... :)

In chappie 4 you said you wanted to write a smutty piece with Momiji and Haru but Momiji's too innocent... I know just what you mean... but what if you make him a cute little tease? Put him in one of Ayame's creations, and have him tease Haru to absolute distraction? Obviously you can't do it in this fic, Momiji's too sad, and broken, plus ya wanna finish it in one more chap, so ya can't do it then, but that's my theory for Momiji/Haru smut:) Up to you what ya wanna do with it... My email's Lady. if ya do it, cos I wanne read it, your stuff's good...
SatoshiObsessedFreak chapter 5 . 7/19/2006

Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena
lemmesee chapter 4 . 7/8/2006
staring at the screen, eyes wide, lips wobbling and then...


omg this is so sweet!

it just is an awesomest story...I WISH I COULD really is a cool plot...
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