|Reviews for The Time it Takes|
| Elesem chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Wow, very nice, quiet little portrait you painted. Even without crystal clear memories of the trilogy, I got a clear sense of her character and her conflicted grief in just your few words. That's the poet in you.
Great job. :D
| Michi Leona chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
I love it! It's really like Kitty and not like those other fics that make her so OOC. The ending also has a lot of truth to it, and I can imagine this being the epilogue of Ptolemy's Gate so easily. Really good job!
| Mysterious Sapphire Butterfly chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
i loved it!
just as great as ur phasma morteus story.
| GOGreen13 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
So in character!Loved it!Quiet and questiong...Like Kitty's other side.
Vey different POV and persppecrive,
| Keikolilo chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
I enjoyed reading this story. I think you stayed true to Kitty's thoughts and emotions in this piece. :)
| ValkyrieRavenfeather chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
It's good to see something where Kitty is questioning what she really felt about Nathaniel, because techincally she didn't know him very well at all. I liked the perspective. Well-written.
| Saddened Soul chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
I think you captured Kitty pretty well in this oneshot; she hardly knew Nathaniel at all, but there was still something of an attraction between them.
All in all, a good story. Doesn't scream out, "ZOMG NAT/KITTY FOREVER!" It's quiet, like it should be.
| delete delete does not compute chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Sweet. I love how she's talking to herself and how true it all is: how long will it take? Especially when no one's ragging on you to get on with life, and all that.
(Thanks for reviewing my story, by the way. Once I get some time, I'm definitely reading the rest of your Bartimaeus fics!)
| Seshata chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
This was great. *sniffs* Never stop writing!
| The Thirteenth Councilor chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
That's beautiful. Just beautiful.
| XxBlackChaosxX chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Wow. I like this alot. Shows me a side of Kitty I never noticed. The softer side...THANKS ALOT! Now I'm gonna be sappy all day!
Haha, just kidding. Liked it. Hope you win for...whatever it is you're doing.
| Coruscate Corruption chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Haha. Couldn't resist Nat/Kitty, could you?
I knew it.
Really good...writing my mediocore work right now too as we speak.
| Angst Equinox chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Meh, I thought this could be free from shipping...
Kitty mourning the passange of Nat, good. A bit overdone, just a bit, but still good.
But I still say: NAT DIED! WOO HOO! YES!
| Mrs Pierre Bouvier chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
A very good angsty one shot! I jus trealized it's been over a year since I read 1 and 2 from the trilogy, I didn't expect Nathaniel to die! I love your Bartimaeus stories!
| AgiVega chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
Nice as all your 'Kitty mourns Nat' fics :) What's this Barty forum everyone's talking about these days? Where can I find it? (could you give me the link in a reply - just putting in spaces here and there to make sure ffnet doesn't automatically delete the link?) Thanks.