Reviews for Falling
babblebuzz chapter 9 . 5/22/2011
RoseRed0500 chapter 9 . 4/24/2011
I love this story! It was amazingly cute and even if people say Kaidoh was "OOC" that doesn't matter! I loved every bit of it and thought it was amazing. Please write more stories please!
Pampers Baby Dry chapter 9 . 10/30/2009
i'm not into the whole tezuka/kaidoh thing, more of an Inui/Kaidoh, but this was just plain cute! i loved it! totally a fav!
amainage chapter 9 . 8/11/2009
Loved the oblivious Kaidoh, nice fic on my faves you go. This is one of the unusual pairing I enjoy, thanx for writing it this pairing is hard for me to find.
Mahon chapter 9 . 8/3/2009
An unusual pairing and yet it is strangely cute!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 9 . 4/14/2009
Inui, you know WAY to much about people's personal lives... And you are right about the kiss.

I wonder if their parents know? It sounds like they do and are accepting of it, thank goodness.

I like the team's reaction... Ryoma, stop giving Taka-san his racquet!

This is great! I like the pairing... It's sad it's so rare.

Well written! Great read!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 8 . 4/14/2009
Yay! Inui, for the win! As often as his knowledge and meddling and evil drinks get on my nerves, I think he just made up for it by giving Kaidoh the kick he needed to get him to confess to Tezuka.

I'm glad that all got straightened out between the two of them! Happy Khel!

Well written! To the epilogue!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 7 . 4/14/2009
KAIDOH! YOU IDIOT! CHASE AFTER HIM! That's what you want and you push him away? Momo's right, you are baka, Viper!

Very extreme reaction to realizing you are in love, by the way, locking yourself in your room every free minute when you don't have to be anywhere else... Why are you doing that? Embarrassment?

Well written. Forward I go to see how Kaidoh deals with the mess he made...
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 6 . 4/14/2009
Poor Tezuka... That reaction probably hurt him...

An Ice Cream Parlor? That was unexpected! Good idea, though.

YAY! Kaidoh has finally realized his feelings! Win!

Well written! Next chapter, here I come!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 5 . 4/14/2009
Kaidoh went to MOMO for advise? That was unexpected! ...Then again, who else could he go to that Kaidoh can easily keep from finding things out, and wont just make things more confusing for him?

What in the world IS Tezuka planing?

Well written! Onward, ever onward!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 4 . 4/14/2009
Inui is far to preceptive and manipulative, managing to get Kaidoh to think about the possibility of being in love without Inui actually saying it, and able to deny that Inui's even thinking of that possibility...

Hm... I wonder what Tezuka and Inui are planning...

Well written. To the next chapter!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 3 . 4/14/2009
Did they both just have the same dream? Interesting!

Tezuka turns to Inui for this? I'd have thought he'd consult Oishi, since Oishi is his best friend... Then again, Oishi is a mother hen, and Inui's more likely to know how Kaidoh feels...

Well written! Onward I go!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
Poor Kaidoh...

I like seeing what's going on in his mind! Inui knowing something is up isn't a surprise, but I wonder how many other people know... And how much they know.

Well written! To the next chapter!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Literally running into each other, huh? I like, despite the cliched-ness of it.

It would bug Kaidoh that Tezuka did nothing about it... done with keeping in character.

Well written! Onward for me!
silvergirl1000 chapter 9 . 2/26/2009
I absolutely loved your story! Thank you so much for taking your time on writing this gold piece! To your fortune, I must say that I think that they were all very in-character ;P In my opinion, Kaidoh acted just like he would in the real show. Tezuka too, of course :D

I love unusual pairings! So you really made my week with this fanfic. And I just got into this anime too... so I am glad that your fanfic is one of the first ones I've read in the PoT section ;P

Anyway, I so hope you could write more to this pairing. I was kinda sad when it ended, but I was so giddy because of the ending! I squealed more than I have during a smut fanfic :D Thank you again and have a good day! :3
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