Reviews for Fool
The chaos crystal chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
It was pretty good I've gotta admit... chaos time!
yourknightinshiningarmor chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
i dont read things with retarded grammar...i suggest the book: Grammar for Dummies
SodiumMan chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
huh...i liked this story overall...but you seemed to change tenses alot...and it just sounded wierd...

“…Do I need any reason for being fall in love with you?”

and sentences like this... "being fall in love" makes no gramatical sense, it would be either "falling in love" or "being in love" there are quite a few of those in there too..
Fossil Fox chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
hey great story 4 your first time keep up the good work i only hope that mine dose just as well
CrazySpiderSenses chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Hm...I thought it was a bit too short. Maybe you should've added a little more awkwardness to it? Well, I thought it was cute, nonetheless.
Haprilona chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Nice ficcie ya got there. Though it seemed that you avoided using some words, but that's just me. It's a bit short, like you said, but it's still very nice. Good work!