God this is so sad, but it’s amazing and beautiful at the same time. I wasn’t expecting this at all, however it makes sense. Ty for this bittersweet story (sorry for my english, not my native language)

Wow, I was not expecting that ending at all! For me, that solidified just how time fixes things over time.
It was so sad to see that both Kakashi and Jiraiya died just to fix the timeline (Sasuke too, but I feel like he knew what he was getting himself into)
Seeing how broken Naruto was by Sasuke's death, as well as how positive Sakura was, was another incredibly sad thing
But at the same time, so many lives were saved and so many people were able to live happier lives
I loved how this story played out - it was a great journey that I thoroughly enjoyed
Seeing how Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi dealt with facing their past and, in Naruto's case, finding out about his parents, was amazing and so well done
And I love how you slowly grew to love Sasuke and Sakura as well
I absolutely loved this story!

Well, I just found it yesterday, I enjoyed it. It ends just the way it should, just because of the time paradox of people not to be able to exist in the same time period.

Ah. It seems the incel reviewers are coming out to play because Sakura isn't written as a dumb woman and said incel obviously can't read where it says COMPLETED. It finished years ago. It started years ago. Time is hard. I understand not everyone passes kindergarten.

It's okay. We get that you gotta jerk it while crying to Sakura porn because no one wants to touch your greasy dick and the only way you get off is sucking your thumb and watching abusive porn because you think women are lesser than you, and that you've never satisfied a woman in your life.

I think there's support groups for that, anon! It's called Reddit-oh wait, right, incel groups got banned. Oops.

Anyways Sakura is best girl and weebs are once again disappointing their mothers.

what a shit fic, glad this trash is abandoned

SAKURA IS DANGEROUS... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
fucking retard of an author

I really love what you did to Naruto here, amazing! 2nd read during covid. Gosh I’ve read this years ago hoho. I hope you write another Naruto stories.

I really didn't expect this to have a dark ending both i love it! Thank you for giving me an amazing read!

I actually found this today. But I found it enjoyable to read. Thank you for taking the time to write this story.

I was so not expecting the ending.
It MaKeS mE sAd

Itachi is cute

Wow, I can't believe you write this story in 2006, and I just read it now, in 2019. It makes me wonder when I read the part about Naruto's parents, and your note about them, especially when you said you based this story with Minato as Naruto's father. I just wondered, "Huh isn't it obvious?" Before I scroll up and realize that this story is written in 2006... I just graduate elementary school back then XD

Anyway I found this story after searching for a light story with humor tag. Honestly? I found more angst in this one. But I still can't stop reading until the last chapter, it is that good. Bittersweet, but very sweet at the same time :')

Thank you for this story author-san!

Man, now I’ve got to deal with this feeling I get every time I finish a good book, so you’ve definitely succeeded in taking me on a journey.

Oh the last line is amazing

Holy crap what the heck