Reviews for Smile |
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![]() ![]() NOOOO YOU CANT JUST LEAVE A STORY LIKE THAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT IN THE WORLD IS WRONG WITH HIM! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I be hurting when I see itachi written as the villain. But for my number one ship... |
![]() ![]() This work is absolutely phenomal. This is the best and I mean the BEST NaruSasu fanfic I've come across. Over the past 2 days I read this, and this gave me so many feels. I love the way you describe the eyes as an emotion and how Naruto and Sasuke look at each other's eyes to figure out whatever the other is feeling. I was so sad when I discovered that this hasn't been updated in seven years and I think you have probably forgotten about this. I don't know why I'm saying this, but if you are still out there and remember this, please update this. I read the first scene of Chapter 29 by using the link for your LiveJournal account and it was really good so far. Your style of writing is amazing and over the years it has improved so much making this fanfic even better. I love this fanfiction. It is beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve just spent several days reading this and thoroughly enjoyed it, the story has progressed wonderfully and the writing style is so eloquent and beautiful but I am absolutely distraught that it has been left on such a cliffhanger! Please one day return and finish this, even if it’s just a final chapter that somehow rounds things off. This is beautiful and it saddens me to know I might never find out how you intended it to end. |
![]() ![]() This is interesting. I think I have read this before. |
![]() ![]() Noooooo no no why are you so mean |
![]() ![]() Oh nooooo Itachi's back! |
![]() ![]() Oooooo Sakura is jealous... |
![]() ![]() I like this:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! |
![]() ![]() I REALLY enjoyed reading this story. It was the perfect example of an emotional roller coaster, relationship wise, that is. After reading one of the most shittiest stories out there...this really patched my NaruSasu heart up! Thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to write this, because truly it is a beautiful piece. I hope you consider writing more stories in the future. This was flawless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say... when there was no mention of Sakura with Ino... in other words, Ino had not heard about the breakup from Sakura... I thought Itachi had killed her... LOL |