Reviews for You're in the army now |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As I’ve been reading this I think it was necessary to have Rin stay young. There wouldn’t have been much to help Sesshoumaru see her and get some insight I to her person with out Rin being young and innocent. And to that person who says it isn’t right, Shippo was about 50 years old in the original just a kid in human terms. If anything it would have made more sense that they argued that Shippo should be younger and Rin should be older because that’s how things would have turned out in the original manga. I really love how the story is going so far! This is one of the many works that I enjoy from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read this story and rin needs to go Kagome is in the army not a babysitter... if you made shippo an adult then you should have hmade rin one as well... it is only right... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was such a sweet story. Absolutely adored kagome here. I like how she wasn't so wimpy. Love a good strong female character that haven't lost her feminine side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was marvelous! I absolutely loved it! |
![]() ![]() Meanie! But i like that,at least they survive. I like angst story,but it's rare for sess-kag die. Maybe that would make me crying out loud. |
![]() ![]() I like this a lot! That's character suitable a lot to sesshy-chan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really loved this fic, it's really hard to find military based or yakuza based fics for some reason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soo good! Great job! |
![]() ![]() THAT was well written , Sad moments, some happy moments. i couldn't stop reading :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read it in a one-er very good story and I enjoyed reading it, loved that you did not rush things etc Although I was ready to kill you when Sessh got left behind xD Glad to have gotten the happy ending I wanted so bad lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha Kagome is such a cute character! Liked this story very much! Ending was great. |
![]() ![]() That was favorite chapter in You're in the army now has to be chapter nine.I could imagine as they walked in slow motion in a is beautiful.A true war story,the best one so far. Sincerely,KyoTakiKikoHyo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story Thanks for sharing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kyaaaaa! Ohmigod that was awesome! Finally a story with some real bad ace action! I really enjoyed this. K thanks peace love byeeee! |