Reviews for Alive
Blazequakes chapter 2 . 10/27/2016
i didn't think their would be well written stories about Phantom brave but here it is a VERY well written story
Trish chapter 2 . 6/10/2015
kyaaa~! this fic is so sweet xD
OMGNipponIchiFan chapter 2 . 4/26/2014
OMG YES YES YES YES YES YES! I love it! so much! YEs! Pie upon pie upon pie upon a gazillion thumbs up to you! Thank you so much for a wonderful story!
Nicolas chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
This is old as hell, so probably no one will read this, but where did you get that ash couldn't feel? was it something only in the japanese version? or just something i don't remember?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
She'd be eighteen not sixteen, she was thirteen at the beginning of the game. But this was a very good story so kudos!
The Genius Mage chapter 2 . 6/22/2011
This was freaking stunning and beautiful. I love it to pieces! I don't know what City of Angels is so WOOHOO! AND I LOVE STUFF LIKE THIS. I'm a sucker for romance and you just gave me my daily fixing of fluff.

Great work~!
Eyeshield chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
Thank you for a good story that did not give me a coma. :D

Seriously, I was waiting for this couple to have a good get together at the end BUT NOOO! They just looked like best friends, bro and sis. Thanks you.

And I don't know what City of Angels is, so you're safe. FOR NOW...
AzureEnding chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
...I totally didn't know her friend could walk yet...i didn't know who the final boss was ether...but eh i'll let you have it it was good. lol
Maiyatsumi chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
OMG ILY XDD I was laughing when he was coming back to life though. Just the wording and the fact he got himself smacked in the head, I don't know I'm a bit of a saddist.

"Ash's head collided with the beam. He hit it with such force, he teetered and, in a daze, toppled down the stairs to land on his back. Thankfully some-what cushioned by the hearth rug. He blinked the moisture from his eyes before releasing himself to the darkness that threatened to take his vision.

Finally. Ash'd been gifted the death he'd so desperately asked for. So he thought."

Thank you so much again for the read D
Maiyatsumi chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I love romance stories like this :3 3 so thank you for putting on just the sorta thing I was looking for! It said on wiki that Marona was 13, and so I thought she would be 18 here, and gosh that confused me. But still, we don't know the official ages right o-o... or did I miss something? Thanks for the good read D
Mitsuki Horenake chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
THAT. WAS. SO. CUTE. I'm gonna go read it a couple thousand times again _
Atelier Ani chapter 2 . 11/26/2008
W-wow. That was...great!

I really enjoyed it~!

XD Had tears in my eyes at the end~

XD Over-exposure of fluff and cliché-ness won't put you in a coma...XD it's good for the soul! Lolol.
shelwyn chapter 2 . 9/26/2007
tyhat was nice but i have to go take my medicen or il puck lol j/k it was a little fluffy but what made him alive again what if marona used revive on ash lol
shelwyn chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
yea hes svrewed
jer2ger chapter 2 . 7/9/2007
Woah...Good Story! I love did a good job...A very good I haven't beat the game,so I shouldn't have read this..but oh well.I loved it,and that's what counts.

(( Truth is I'm not even fast the First Chapter 2 mission...but I am level 26 already.I do have the book,so oh well.))

ANyway...Great Story!
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