|Reviews for Becoming|
| Evci chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
God, that was hilarious ! Now, Cloud... COME BACK WITH MY SON YOU GODDAMN TURK!
Loved it !
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
(Laughs) 'Say no Cloud. Say no.' 'No?' 'Not to me you-' Great story! I loved it! I love how at the beginning, while Eleanor is talking to the SOLDIER, Cloud falls off his barstool. Sorry, but that part really cracked me up. Thank you for the awesome story to read!
| CrimsonReality chapter 1 . 7/22/2006