|Reviews for The Story of Kailani|
| xxAngelofDethxx chapter 4 . 7/1/2006
I think I get it. (you know the whole Jack building the skate park thing.) Sweet! update soon!
| HopelesslyFlawed chapter 3 . 6/30/2006
Remember,I was your first fan! This chapter was cool, specially the whole him holding her hand and being like 'What?We've known eachother a whole day' lol.
| xxAngelofDethxx chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
This is really good! UPDATE!
| SS14 chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
Pretty cool story so far ... I look forward to reading more.
| HopelesslyFlawed chapter 2 . 6/29/2006
Lol,this story ish cool! The song I was listening to while I read it threw the mood though...Sadmusic offsets funny stuff for some strange reason(sarcasm in the questioning there) Um...yeah... *walks away to torture a ragged, slightly burnt Kimiko doll*
| HopelesslyFlawed chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
O.O JackxOC?PWEASE SAY YES!I like her look at least, but it was a pretty short tidbit so...not much to comment on.I hope you write more, but in the meantime, I have a kimiko voodoo doll to continue torturing,we're using safty pins today! favs