Reviews for Lovers Entwined
OO7O chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
That was very different. But I loved it immensely. I liked the point of view you chose. It wasn't first person. Very sweet. Malky needs to get out of the way sometimes, but I'll let it slide because they were sleeping. I loved the waking up .. scene.. (for lack of better word!) It was very nice, the last line was beautiful.


That made my morning.
NewYorks chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
Oh, this was nice. I especially loved the last line. Good job.
KelpayLuv chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
i know it says one shot but will you PLEASE make it a 2 shot...i'll give you a shiny penny!
Kennedy Leigh Morgan chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
Cool fic. It's beautifully written, almost like poetry especially at the beginning. And so vivid...Awesome job!