|Reviews for For Better or Worse|
| BlueSkyMornings chapter 9 . 6/16/2008
I'm confused. Wasn't it you that had a divorce story like this, where the reason was because she miscarried because she was changing a light and fell off the ladder?
Why do miscarrages manage to drive people apart? It was the same thing in Sweet Home Alabama. He was like "So i can kiss you anytime I want" as kids, then high school sweethearts, and she "got pregnant right out of high school" and then she wanted to lose her old self... yada yada... I loved that movie!
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 9 . 4/30/2008
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 9 . 8/12/2007
aw I can't believe it's over...it's so adorable...I loved it.
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 8 . 8/12/2007
aw i love it! it's wonderful.
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 7 . 8/12/2007
aw i love it! it's awesome...they're so adorable...
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 6 . 8/12/2007
yay james...i love it.
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 5 . 8/12/2007
oh snap...it's getting good...
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 4 . 8/12/2007
ooh poor lily and james. i love it.
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 3 . 8/12/2007
oh snap...well i like it.
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 2 . 8/12/2007
Yeah ok...keep telling urself that James...He loves Lily still!
| HarryPotterFreakEver chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
aww poor Lily...
| Amiiix3 chapter 9 . 8/1/2007
| Veronica chapter 9 . 6/21/2007
Your plot is good, but your story lacks depth. You didn't include emotion into the story, so I couldn't feel any connection with the characters. Try to elaborate on what the characters feel.
You might also need to touch up your grammar and punctuation skills. Commas and periods are needed in many places in this story. Maybe you could get someone to edit your story. You could then revise it and make it more perfected.
Overall, I love the storyline and creativity. If you just fix a few aspects of the story, it will be great!
| xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 9 . 5/14/2007
very cute ] xx
| NickeyMouse chapter 9 . 5/14/2007
aw! That was adorable! a bit of a tearjerker! loved it