|Reviews for The Reason|
| Yomi chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Hey there! I've reviewed your fanfic at my forum, Review Metro, owing to the limitations in formatting here at . You can follow the link on my bio page (or type "reviewmetro . proboards106 . com" - minus the spaces) and look under the 'HxH Fanfic Review Department' category to read your review, and you don't have to be registered to reply.
Cheers n' Beers.
| Nobody chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
Okay, actually this is somehow quite not... satisfying? No, I don't say your grammar is bad. It's the plot. Your idea is good, but describe it MORE. Add details and make it much longer. You have good potency. Just need to practice more. So... Good luck!
| Shiro-chan chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
It's cool, but I found some mistakes. Yeah, this is quite common. Kurapika and angst! XD Love em all!