Reviews for Devil Inside
DarksideHasCookies chapter 21 . 11/6/2008
again, fantastic work...

Have to go study now, have been procrastinating reading your stories for way to long

if i fail my exams its your fault :P lol
ClaMiAl chapter 21 . 10/30/2008
I must say, that I like this fic better than its prequel. Can't quite say why. Part of it is, I think, that I like the dialogue in this one better. And it was interesting to see more and more pieces of Logan's past coming together. Though, as weird as it may sound, the best part for me was the ending. It absolutely blew me away! I loved it! I had planned to finish reading this chapter and then go to bed (it's 2am, so that's really where I should be) but now...I can't. I have to go and read the next instalment in this series and see what happens next. So...I'm off. Thanks for the very enjoyable read!
ceilidh-kay chapter 21 . 3/17/2008
Wow.

That's all I can say. Wow. I love your story. Angela and Logan are perfect. The plots work out really well and I cant believe that you ended this here! Now Im gonna freak out until I find out exactly what happened. Oh, and thanks for not killing Marie, that wouldve been just too weird, and too too much. Thank you!
Morgomir chapter 21 . 9/21/2007
Great chapter. Love the gore. Keep up the good work.
theywouldntletmedeletethis chapter 21 . 10/11/2006
Read the entire little stint in one sitting. Very fun stuff. Enjoyable as the first. Glad I stuck around!

L
ButNothing chapter 10 . 9/23/2006
This is actually getting more interesting as the lines pass by.

(See, I told you I would continue reading your stories.)
ButNothing chapter 5 . 9/23/2006
Nice try with the Mind Trick. I'm so sorry that it ain't working...

Really liked this chapter. Maybe 'cause there are certain similarities between your story and mine. The ripped throat was an exellent image.

...a cliffie.. *snicker*
RhiannonUK chapter 21 . 8/27/2006
Oh! A twister of a cliffie. I'm gonna save the new fic for later. That world class drink 'n' scoff I told ya about is beckoning.
RhiannonUK chapter 19 . 8/27/2006
Logan calling a woman boss? Never thought I'd see the day...

ROFLMAO

And off to the next chappie I go!
RhiannonUK chapter 18 . 8/27/2006
Actually, I think Havok is a geologist... Okay, I'll shut up now. Evil laff.

On to the next chapter.
RhiannonUK chapter 17 . 8/27/2006
Logan actually enjoying life? Now why do I think there is no way on earth this is gonna continue?

Grin
RhiannonUK chapter 16 . 8/27/2006
The car scene reminds me of something Joe said to me a while back - that the way to a guy's heart is not through his stomach but through his ride. Glad that applies to girls too. Grin.
RhiannonUK chapter 15 . 8/26/2006
Okay, ya probably knew this was gonna come. Substance hardness, or to be more precise, how to measure the strength of a mineral (how strong the atomic bonds are) using the Mohs scale. Since diamond possesses an extremely strong atomic matrix it is capable of scratching the surface of a less strong matrix. No other mineral can scratch the surface of a diamond in the real world. So far so good.

What ya seem to have done here is confuse strength with hardness. Diamond can be crushed which means that although it is hard it is not equally strong and it does not scratch adamantium. If it did someone would have taken a diamond drill to Logan's skull years ago. Kissing pavement, no matter how hard, would not dent him. He's fallen thousands of feet from a 'plane, been incinerated, been blown up, had mountains fall on top of him and come out without a scratch to the metal. Being carried along by a glacier for 6 months didn't even polish him.

Colossus is almost as physically strong in flesh form as when he takes on his organic metal form. Being metal makes him impervious to injury (as a rule).

In MU Maverick and Kestrel (Wraith) still work for Weapon X. So does Sabretooth on and off - even went back voluntarily. Only in X2 was Deathstrike a mutant "working" for WX. In MU she was born human and had herself turned into a cyborg. Nothing to do with WX at all. I know I'm being pedantic but hell, ya know what I'm like with canon. Maybe I should get a life. Grin.

On to the next chap now.
RhiannonUK chapter 14 . 8/26/2006
Finally got around to reading the chap. Heading for 15 right now!
sela103 chapter 21 . 8/6/2006
so... i'm really looking forward to this sequel you've mentioned...

great story! you've done a pretty good job and i'm sure the next sequel is going to be just the same if not even better!
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