Reviews for Tinderbox
SailorZelda chapter 6 . 4/4/2011
Nice job with this piece. I really like your language usage and your thoughts on the characters' thought processes. :)
Scamporeo chapter 6 . 3/15/2009
Awesome job! I love it!
BG chapter 4 . 3/1/2009
Actually near the end of season one and perhaps even before that we see the broad swords proudly hanging on the wall in zuko's room, its how zhao figures out he's the Blue Spirit. and beyond that it's never specified that the swords are of the oxtail variety, simply that they are dual dao broadswords. and Dao broadswords are referred to as "The General of all Weapons" since they are the base design for many weapons used in the far east. and the simplest argument to make against your veiw is that in the 1700's the Imperial Guards Brigade used the dao broadsword(s) as their primary melee weapon. as well as the relativley old martial arts practice of Shuangdao the weilding of twin dao. sorry for rambling nice story but i can't help it when i see people make these kind of mistakes
Ashrial chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I've got to say, I'm really intrigued by this story. The Zuko and Mai interaction is really good, and I'm really curious to see what happens next.
Kimba616 chapter 6 . 6/20/2007
OH MY GOD UPDATE! I DON'T USE CAPS, IS THIS ANY INDICATION ON HOW MUCH I WANT YOU TO UPDATE? PLEASE?1
reddragonn343 chapter 6 . 4/12/2007
heh...it'd be nice to continue
KaboomingKitsune-LookWhoBlewUpTheToilet chapter 6 . 3/16/2007
I think this one was my fav chapter.
Forge chapter 6 . 2/4/2007
Please update this story! Please.
Zpiral chapter 6 . 1/20/2007
I like your story.

I hope you finish this, someday...
bhut chapter 6 . 1/18/2007
Very intriguing... is it going to be updated anytime in the future?
Emma C Oliver chapter 6 . 12/18/2006
great story keep up teh great work
cryingdove chapter 6 . 12/5/2006
Please update soon. This is such a good story, I need to know what happens next.
starrzjsc chapter 2 . 12/4/2006
hello
starrzjsc chapter 6 . 12/4/2006
Please get the next chap. up! Love ya! X3
Iron Butterfly of Kinzan chapter 6 . 11/10/2006
hey... two months have passed and you haven't updated yet? please don't abandon this fic... it's really good, i swear. bring in the next one, fast!
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