Reviews for Insanity's Ending
Guest chapter 21 . 11/20
You know what!? I'm done with this! Boring! Goodbye! Good explanation... But... Eh, whatever I'm leaving...
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20
Oh yes! Now I remember this story!... All I can say about it is meh... I don't think I could ever finish it... Naruto's WAY to docile for my tastes... And does he have some sort of multiple personality disorder now? Like really...*closes eyes and has an annoyed yet confused expression on my face, whilst my hands fly all over the place in my annoyed confusion* and really...? he has the Hirashin jutsu... Yet that doesn't help!? You know what!? I don't care! Whatever! I'll read it again to see how this works just because I feel like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20
Ahh, yes I remember reading this a while ago... I suppose I'll read it again... Since I can't remember if I liked it or not... Though I'm pretty sure I got bored of it... Let's see... I'll see...
daggers.97 chapter 11 . 11/4
You. Had. Neji. A. Fucking. Genin. Dodge. The. Hiraishin. Something 1000-10000 IWA NIN (GENIN CHUNIN JOUNINCOULDN'T DO. REALLY
daggers.97 chapter 7 . 11/4
Thanks for the weak Naruto.
Guest chapter 21 . 10/24
My god I love you
hakon2feb chapter 15 . 9/13
Um... so a note about the Hiraishin jutsu... The way Naruto is seemingly spamming it every chance he gets, while the enemy manages to dodge more than half the time is just bad. I mean, it's starting to get to the level of massive groups of shadow clones.
A little back story: Naruto can't use his clones to the full potential, which is why he ends up spamming them with low to no results (Except later with wind rasengan and sage mode).
Now: Hiraishin is supposed to be the fastest jutsu in like, ever. It's supposed to be a one shot one kill jutsu every time. You are having Neji, Itachi and Tsunade all dodge or anticipate the attacks with equal ease, which means you have made the Hiraishin into a fodder jutsu.
Shame on you.
hakon2feb chapter 5 . 9/12
You actually didn't have Kakashi step in, and got one of his students possibly lethally hurt(Poison is no joke...) in the process? What's wrong with you?
hakon2feb chapter 2 . 9/12
Your logic is flawed.
Painlover792 chapter 21 . 8/10
Well that was weird yet somehow satisfying :)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/7
One cannot attain the skill set mentioned over here
It is one thing to surprise kakashi but to injure him is dramatic
The plot is very intriguing and very soundly based
Please make it slow and thoughtful
...naruto is strong but not godlike to learn sswordsmanship so fast...
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7
Good but keep it simple
Guest chapter 19 . 7/11
b chapter 20 . 7/11
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 7 . 6/28
I can see why some people don't like yaoi even though I love it. I think most people either don't like it because of reasons or because of think its about the smut. Personally I don't like yaoi because of smut and I don't like reading stories that are just smut. Anyway just saying that I do really like this. The fact that Naruto is insane but not is a nice touch. I kind off like how Naruto acts different but its because of a good reason instead of I hate canon Naruto. I don't really like how people complain about canon Naruto all the time. But I get why some people change his character. Anyway sorry for ranting. I do love this story a lot. Thanks for writing.
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