|Reviews for Tomoko Maeda: Lost Sanctuary|
| The Sherlockian chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Ah, it is always great to see another Siren fan!
You have a very nice one-shot here. Kept one on their toes and had a nice moment of false-security right before you offed poor Tomoko ;-;. You also made sure it fit plausibly into the storyline, which considering how open-ended Tomoko's fate was, is a very good thing.
Pretty much the only things I would suggest would be to describe the tabori settlement (the house, basically) in a bit more detail. Other then that, a job well done!
| DbKiT chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Wow. Very descriptive yet very depressing. Too bad it wouldn't have mattered even if she made it home. As seen in the game. She's doomed no matter what.
| Mazzie May chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Now, see, I like Tomoko. I did not like her stupid run through the woods, making as much noise as possible. That has to attract attention.
Good job trying to justify her actions. Running scared's a good excuse to cause ruckus in the woods.
| Sok Sahn chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
It was really great to read something about Tomoko, it was really well written! I think it's great that since Siren Maniacs isn't translated into English, this gives some insight into what really happened to make her turn. Also I think this fanfiction really keeps in touch with the real story of Siren, and it could have easily been any cutscene in the game. Well Done!