|Reviews for DBV Series 6: Afterlife Adventures|
| GOD OF VENGEANCE chapter 42 . 2/27/2013
Another great job man great story
| Guest chapter 42 . 2/10/2013
U are my new favorite writer and this is my new favorite story
| Guest chapter 36 . 10/28/2012
Verto what problem du you have aganst Frieza
| Bills Feline of Destruction chapter 27 . 1/23/2012
nooooooo... Friezell was awesome... they will fuse back together again right?
| BillyTheKid621 chapter 42 . 8/29/2010
I'm glad I started reading this story a month ago! I truly love this story, for both the events that happen and all the fights and what-not. I'm about to start the 7th saga, and hopefully this is just as good (I am 100 percent sure it will be better). Until then, keep up the awesome work!
| marc chapter 25 . 5/8/2010
| jeff chapter 25 . 4/5/2010
hey man u didnt say why they didnt just use the crack into king yemmas desk tofigure out how to kill Kaa
| kanifer kanenajarhotmail.com chapter 42 . 9/20/2009
Another saga I enjoyed very much. I liked the way Verto saved everyone from the virus. Very glorious. :-D
| kanifer chapter 17 . 9/19/2009
ahahahaha I love the power levels at the end...
"Gohan: Does it matter?" LOL You're the funniest :-D
| kanifer chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
I've been a silent fan of yours for several years. I also thought that self-insert would be ridiculous in the beginning, but you proved me wrong. :)
I know you wrote this piece a long time ago, so you already be aware of what I am about to write to you... but I wanted to comment on the sentence way up top:
“Is it agreed then?” one asked, sounding quite elderly but also wise.
"sounding quite elderly, but also wise" to be exact.
I'm not seeing this combo go good together, especially with the sentence construction (not wrong, just has an unnatural feeling to it) If half feels cliche, and half feels too obvious. An elderly person is usually always wise in this situation, (although not really always, but I think you know what I mean)
I'll give you an example, from which you can make a better sentence, or even take the whole sentence.
"Is it agreed then?" an elderly one said, his voice exuding wisdom.
Please don't take my critique the wrong way; I'm a fan. :)
| astronight34int chapter 10 . 8/24/2009
Great idea with SS2, keep up the good work!
| astronight34int chapter 13 . 8/21/2009
great fight, wonderful story
| Snare646 chapter 42 . 6/9/2009
Well, I finished up this saga, now moving on to the next. I remember some of what happened in the 7th. LIke your interesting choice of villians. I'll be all the way caught up again soon so keep pounding out the chapters please.
| Snare646 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Well, I'm finally starting part 6... again. Lost interest during 7 because I totally forgot the background and pretty much who verto was about a year ago, so I decided to start over. It's funny how I start remembering how things unfold while reading it. I hope you keep pounding out updates to 7, because I'm fast catching up.
I also starting play Starcraft again during the last two installments. I havn't finished the expansion yet so I can't remember what happens to kerrigan. Will she be making any more appearances in the future?
I'm also wondering about Uub, I can't remember exactly when he appeared in the DBZ timeline, but he is a character that you have plans with? Is he gonna have the mystic power too?
| Sultan chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Series 6 re-reading... 5th was awesome¡