Reviews for Double Looks
babyvfan chapter 11 . 7/27
...I have no words
babyvfan chapter 10 . 7/27
Still on fence. I get why Harry is emotional, but he seems more so than usual. And very sensitive, which is also understandable but still random to me
babyvfan chapter 9 . 7/27
Very sweet. Still feels random but sweet
babyvfan chapter 8 . 7/27
Wow.

Eight chapters in and I really don't know what to make of this story. I hate how Harry is being treated. I hate the fact Sirus and Remus are so clueless. I hate how Hermione and Ron are really pushing him. But I'm willing to see this story though. It does seem interesting
doitsukawaiidesu chapter 8 . 7/22
Oh my god. It's only the 8th chapter and I'm bawling my eyes out. This is so sad! I hope it at least ends on a happier note. But I digress, great job so far, I love the wording and easy flow of the story!
Zyenna chapter 32 . 7/8
Gaaaah! I am sooo just... raazaaaaaah! That is sooo not cool... Grrrrr... I can't wait for the next one...
lilacwaffles chapter 23 . 5/12
wam bam hey dere man its dumarkus in d club!
lilacwaffles chapter 19 . 5/12
eather vernon is gonna kill harry with the pillow kill harry with the disease or is poisiniing him
lilacwaffles chapter 16 . 5/12
oh fuck shit just hit the fan
lilacwaffles chapter 15 . 5/12
? ? well i guess thats to long maby ? nah oh i have it! professor french
Inkcoat chapter 5 . 3/24
I'm sorry to say it but the characters are just down right creepy, unrealistic and hypocritical. Harry and his girlish behaviour is justified enough, but Sirius's supposed concern for his god son is just nonexistent - who loves his god son enough to not know a single thing about him or his adopted family? The golden trio's behaviour is down right creepy and awkward too.
I admire how you tried to work on a long length fiction, but maybe you should try out on a short length first, to practice with characters' personalities, behaviour and the development of the story' events
Guest chapter 4 . 3/19
snape
My-name-is-a-drug-legit chapter 5 . 1/11
Oh god I loved that moment. "He smiled at me!" HAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
FightsWithBears chapter 4 . 1/1
im, like, 90% sure that there aren't many 11 year olds that are at or above 5'
but i guess its a good portrayal of someone experiencing emotional and physical trauma/abuse for their whole life.
Guest chapter 32 . 12/12/2014
this made me cry but I'm happy it worked well
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