Reviews for Fire
allyg1990 chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
Aw... Poor Pyro... Really well-written!
Valoofle chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Hey! I remember this story from a long time ago! I know it was this one because of Gertrude the duck, which was still very amusing, I must say. It has improved quite a lot! I love that simile you used, that she gave meaning to his life, like a dictionary; that was an awesome literary device. Yay! Good little story, though sad. I commend you!

Valoofle
thriller chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
hey.

ok. not exactly the cheering story i was looking for...but i didn't mind; it was kick ass anyway. but aw! Wanda left John...damn it...once again, great ending; the ending always has to be perfect. its like a song; a good ending and the song will always seem good, a bad ending and the rest of the song turns to dust. so great ending for a great story! loved it - like the duck. Gertrude, nice name! i quite like that name actually!

story rocked; great author _

. .x.
Yvonnia chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
I'm glad someonne out there can still write a decent Jonda fic. Bravo.