Reviews for The Heir of the Throne
blusher15 chapter 32 . 11/16
I was hoping for some lemons, considering how you described all the women in a very descriptive and erotic manner
anonymous chapter 4 . 11/12
to be honest the story so far is pretty good but the problem comes when you created so many OCs that i can really remember their names or how they are supposed to look like. Hence, this results in a lot of confusing and i cant really be bothers to have to go back to a certain chapter just to remember who the certain charactor is and to be honest don't you think that this story is kind of sexist making an entire villages full of girls just to i guess satisfy naruto's harem. Kind of overkill don't you think
Daniel565 chapter 32 . 9/16
Clay19 chapter 4 . 8/4
NaruhinaloverUA chapter 31 . 7/7
This is one of my favorite story. So pls continue this story and update it.
NaruhinaloverUA chapter 1 . 5/8
Please update.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 28 . 5/5
That was horrible... Okay, somebody needs to step up to the plate and show that 1) somebody loves him and 2) he's going about this WRONG way! I don't care who you are I don't care what pain you've felt. If you don't forgive and forget, and you let hate consume you, you will become a monster in your own way. You know what! I'm done with this! This is far too disappointing of a let-down to continue. Adíos, hombre!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 27 . 5/5
Finally progress into the tough hide of this Naruto. Please! Hinata needs to be encouraged and decide to finally be a major part of Naruto's life!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 26 . 5/5
Whoa... Now someone really needs to reach out to Naruto. He needs real love... but he also needs a bit of an attitude adjustment.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 25 . 5/5
No, Hinata!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 24 . 5/5
Not gonna deny. This has quickly delved into madness.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 23 . 5/5
1) This is SO MESSED UP AND DISTURBING IN SO MANY WAYS! 2) There are too many ridiculous elements... 3) Hinata deserves the chance to at least have an opportunity to let Naruto know of her love for him!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 21 . 5/5
There really needs to be more substantial content for relationship development, including conflict, in this.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 20 . 5/5
Yes! Hinata for the win!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 19 . 5/5
Seriously. Naruto at least has to be seeing and noticing how distraught Hinata and Ayame are... unless he's acting too much like Sasuke and plotting his revenge silently.
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