Rachelly chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Aw! Like the brotherly stuff! Dean to the rescue, Sam in trouble...Dean's vow to not let Sam get hurt next time and saying he loved Sam while he was sleeping...cute!
Audio Pineapple chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
It was good - the scene with Sam becoming attacked was riveting - it wasn't obvious he was going to make it out alive, which was good.
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Awesome job. Off to read the next story. Catch ya on the flip side.
AquarianNightSky chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Not bad.
charmed1of2 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
omg dont stop there we need more chapters maybe like um 5 more for now lol
sammysgurl chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
aw that was so good please keep it up!

jka1 chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
the ending was really sweet -
Demmie chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
hm...this is the first fanfic ive read where the story has been placed in the present tense. i dont mind it but it made it a bit harder to read. and as well, im not trying to be nasty or anything, but oyu might want to use commas a little more often, that was the sentences are brought together. anyway, a good stry, i liked the idea.