|Reviews for Cigarettes and Chianti|
| DavisJes chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
| GB Keeper chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
I like the way you describe the story. Well done.
| Thorn on a Rose chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Wonderful description! Beautifully written. I could see the seedy dive they met in; smell the acrid smoke inhaled and exhaled; taste the smooth wine. I could really see only three of the Senshi that would ever be able to be placed comfortably in such a setting and Setsuna and Rei are two of them. The other would be Hotaru.
Till Next Time,
| Silent Ee chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
I liked your story..simple as that
you had excellent discriptions...the rain..the seedy bar..nice atmosphere...
I was wondering about the cigarette..not because I hate them, which I do not..but why Rei would actually smoke it..heh
too bad you said it was a oneshot..I would have liked to see more.
good job..and thank you for the story.
| megan chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
well done !
i liked the decription verry much in this , and the fact that the wommens identites remain unknown ,but known, because you never actualy get told who they are.
the use of a coffie house was good as well as it is often a good place to sit and think ,though i dont really aprove of smoking , lol.
my fave parts of this fic were:1
She inhaled again and chocked as she did so, the taste quickly becoming repulsive to her as the smoke from it made her eyes begin to water.
thats because that is so true of ciggaretes , they always taste bad the first time you smoke, :D
They were older now; they were not careless highschool girls anymore. They had jobs to keep, lives to live: clothing was something far from her mind and she expected that her friend now thought the same.
ppl do get more fussed on clothes in highschool , its so daft ,:P
i liked your opening description too, reminds me of the queen vic on eastenders , though with less violence hopefully , thank god .
theres not much bad here but it culd do with more dialogue, but what was said was verry effective, or short but sweet , lol (like candyfloss ,too quickly eaten and far too nice.)
i would have thought this person to sit at the back of the cafe, considering that she seems somewhat reclusive . does she like to look at ppl passing by? or was it because she was waiting for her friend.
does the rain show a bad mood of the character, or is ot just another element/ form of atmosphere for the story?
whats chianti ?
i wanna try it!XD
what does saguine mean?
and how many times does a vogon fart in a week , and what does it smell like ? sushi gone off mabey?
ps , hope u dont find the review too long .
pps: see ya around , going to review backura's diary.(ha ha more reading 4 you lol)