Reviews for Invisible
Miu Mizuno chapter 3 . 4/24
Te lo puedo decir de corazón y siendo totalmente sincera :) me encanta tu historia :D y ODIO a Brian y a James ¿como rayos puede un padre ser así? te juro que no lo entiendo :( me entristece porque a este paso Harry debería de considerar a Remus su padre o mínimo su padrino :) el es mucho mejor padrino que Sirius (sin ánimos de ofender, adoro a Sirius, pero en esta historia...) Bueno, espero que escribas que fue lo que le paso a Peter :) y como fue a que Remus lo descubrió de mortifago.
Ay :3 me encanta cuando escriben que Harry es cachorro de Remus, me da mucha ternura . aunque no se porque...
Así que una pluma de fénix blanco... así o más obvio vaya error que han cometido todos, ahora que pienso, la profecía decía que esa persona ya estaba aquí, y Brian a penas iba a nacer :) es lo malo de las profecías, siempre hay una probabilidad de entenderlas mal :D
Me encanta la historia :D
Miu
Guest chapter 33 . 4/24
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Astana chapter 33 . 4/25
Me encantó gracias
Fran Ktrin Black chapter 33 . 4/25
Con que no nos dejes para siempre sin saber que sucede, todo esta bien! Un beso enormeee, un cap excelente! Besos bye bye
Fran
lavida134 chapter 33 . 4/25
jajajjaj sufre james sufre muajajajajaja ò.ó ok ya ni vena psicopata se almo pero ocmo me encnata este fic jajajaja por dios esto sera alucinante espero te puedas liberar para tener otra conti de invisible mucho mas pronto del opensado espero subas la conti protno nos leemos byee
sandivivaelanime chapter 33 . 4/24
Es una lastima que tu musa se haya ido de paseo esta historia es realmente buena espero que pronto regrese tu inspiración
richard333 chapter 33 . 4/24
buen capitulo, sigue escribiendo
Susy kstorena chapter 33 . 4/24
Siiii harry el aprendiz de severus va a aprender mucho de él! Muchas gracias por los capítulos me gusto mucho y por supuesto que esperare con ansias el próximo capítulo
Guest chapter 33 . 4/24
Que buen capitulo... un milagro...no lo esperaba !
Guest chapter 33 . 4/24
VOLVISTEEEE!
Espero que no os vuelvas a ir tanto de nuevo. Realme me había olvidado de la historia, si no fuera por una alerta en el mail de tu actualización creo que me la perdía.
Espero que ya nos cuentes el desenlace entre Harry y Voldemort que yo sé que capaz sigas los canones de la profecia y tal, pero tener a un Harry tan pequeño para enfrentarse con Voldemort ...
En fin, salu2
genesis chapter 33 . 4/24
Es tubo bueno hay tienes James para que sigad innorando a tu hijo y dimblendore ja cabo suelto quien lo mando a no ver bien la profecía ja quiero ver estoy anciosa quedate tranquila actualiza cuando puedas asta la próxima actuañizacion
lizzielpz chapter 33 . 4/24
OMG! Creí que mis ojos me engañaban cuando vi la notificación pero no! Qué bueno que estás de regreso, AMO Invisible y este capítulo no fue la excepción *.* me encanta Snape jajaja disfrutando el momento
fernyyuki chapter 33 . 4/24
hola me encanta por dios he seguido esta historia por tantos años... no desaparezcas tanto tiempo.
Mar91 chapter 33 . 4/24
Un aprendizaje en posiones esta muy bien
G chapter 32 . 4/24
Harry es una multifuncion , falta que digan que es dios :p
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