Reviews for a weird weekend
TinkSkates chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Arizona... Not Alabama... I live in Flag.
BabyYoureMyOxygen chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Very cute(:

Could use a bit of editing, but you have a great plot, and a fun story going on.


-Taylor Tonks
Terry Cassie chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Good beginning! :) Continue writing!
Bstromberg chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
Really good story, please more?
GynnyBelle chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Um... Yeah as everybody else already noted, Flagstaff is in Arizona. Not Alabama.

This is... cute? Actually I don't know what to think of it. I like the idea of a short story with this plot. With like awkwardness with her dad and stuff like that, but really, this was an opener. It didn't tell a story. IT opened up a story. Didn't tell it. So it is a good a start. But it needs more details, imagery, and an actual story.

Don't take this as me being rude. It's constructive criticism.

And I'm sorry if you do take it badly.
nikham3 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
ditto on flagstaff being in arizona- i was just there

this is way too short, almost unacceptably short

please continue writing
Ciba chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
um, isn't Flagstaff in AZ not Alabama?
oheygracey chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I love your fic! (There should be more RYV fics out there...) Write more? It's cruel to keep me waiting, LOL! Flagstaff is in Arizona, BTW. UPDATE SOON!
starsshutyourfaces chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
short but good
zombiebounce chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
write more
thetrue-spacecadet chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
don't stop now

you should keep writing there need to be more raise your voice fanfics out there!

love the fluff keep it up!
GoldenLily chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
umm...cute !
starbright37 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
like it so far. update soon.
eccentricpetal chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
its cool so far I hope you update soon!

hnut chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
please continue your story.. -
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