|Reviews for a weird weekend|
| TinkSkates chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Arizona... Not Alabama... I live in Flag.
| BabyYoureMyOxygen chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
Could use a bit of editing, but you have a great plot, and a fun story going on.
| Terry Cassie chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
Good beginning! :) Continue writing!
| Bstromberg chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
Really good story, please more?
| GynnyBelle chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Um... Yeah as everybody else already noted, Flagstaff is in Arizona. Not Alabama.
This is... cute? Actually I don't know what to think of it. I like the idea of a short story with this plot. With like awkwardness with her dad and stuff like that, but really, this was an opener. It didn't tell a story. IT opened up a story. Didn't tell it. So it is a good a start. But it needs more details, imagery, and an actual story.
Don't take this as me being rude. It's constructive criticism.
And I'm sorry if you do take it badly.
| nikham3 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
ditto on flagstaff being in arizona- i was just there
this is way too short, almost unacceptably short
please continue writing
| Ciba chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
um, isn't Flagstaff in AZ not Alabama?
| oheygracey chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
I love your fic! (There should be more RYV fics out there...) Write more? It's cruel to keep me waiting, LOL! Flagstaff is in Arizona, BTW. UPDATE SOON!
| starsshutyourfaces chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
short but good
| zombiebounce chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
| thetrue-spacecadet chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
don't stop now
you should keep writing there need to be more raise your voice fanfics out there!
love the fluff keep it up!
| GoldenLily chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
| starbright37 chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
like it so far. update soon.
| eccentricpetal chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
its cool so far I hope you update soon!
| hnut chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
please continue your story.. -