Reviews for Princess
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
yay good poem! I can't write poems...well I did write one once and my friends said it was really good but that's the only time. Kinda off the top of my head. Well, I'm babbling. This is what Seeu thinks like, I think you did a good job.
Garowyn chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Nice work!
Skittles1 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
too lazy to log in! XD I like the poem. I am very interested in this series now. Would you suggest it?
yokainomiko chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
No offense, but the poem lacks a bit of clarity. I know poems are supposed to be condensed, but you might want to make it a bit longer you know maybe a narration paragraph to show that Seeu is musing? At first I thought Seeu was talking to Kagami (because of the italics). Not bad for a first attempt though. I have yet to gain the courage to write a PL story