Reviews for Voices Airy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i so need to read more of your stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() spanking good writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have I mentioned that you have amazing writing skills as I finally get around to reviewing your BoP stories? Because really you are just... incredible. I don't know how many times I've reread your stories. Your very good at playing on their strengths, insecurities, and other such attributes. This one had them both to overcome there insecurities, and more importantly themselves. Sometimes a little angst can go a long way. Though I'm a sucker for happy endings. I liked the diary and the many entries in it. They were very Helena-ish things in there. The 'Maybe I should just hump her leg' entry made me nearly choke on my drink in laughter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...well that had me riveted to the screen for the past couple hours. You are quite talented, and I thoroughly enjoy your writing. Thanks for a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to confess that I have read this story at least a dozen times and never reviewed. The time has come to rectify my indiscretion. I *love* this story. You write Helena with an ability few seem to have - I can picture her actions, right down to the indignant expressions and sometimes shyness. Your dialogue seems - to me, at least - spot on. Again, I can hear Helena describe herself as swarthy, hear Barbara flirt innocently back. The Barbara/Helena pairing simply does not have enough authors of your caliber and enough stories that bring the readers this much entertainment. Thank you for contributing to the genre and to my enjoyment of Birds of Prey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really cute... and hot. but I did want to smack both Helena and barbara... sheesh, took their fine time. though it was delicous to read. ~dreamer |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! I hated to see that one end, I could have read on forever. It was so well done, emotional and might I say sexy as hell. Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...just Wow. that was AMAZING , Breath taking even. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was an incredible read. I think you characterize these women very well and that, through your words, such scenarios seem altogether possible in canon. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, couldn't resist reviewing this one, either. Definitely one of my favorites, in part because it deals so well with their vulnerabilities, something I think is very hard to do convincingly. Of course, you nailed it. I especially enjoyed the bit where Barbara admitted to herself that she was afraid she might be inadequate for Helena. Definitel a moment where you want to hug the poor thing. Please do write more, these are fabulous. |