|Reviews for The Prior|
| DiamondFish chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
What does fanfic call it when the story contradicts cannon? AU?
Still, it sounds interesting. I will read more. :-)
| bluedragon1836 chapter 17 . 8/13/2007
i liked it. it was good.
| Soccer-Bitch chapter 17 . 3/19/2007
interesting story. i liked it.
| StrgateAtlantis1 chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
The 'inability to turn into a Prior unwillingly' is true! SHIT! WTF did DANIEL DO! He's so stupid, *tears fill my eyes* I don't want to believe this... AND YES! I'M PANICKING! HOLY KJ*(#(*(*#*&( *(&($(&*($(*&()#(*& (*#&! (can u tell me where you found out that you can't be turned into a prior unwillingly? I'd really like to see that, so I can check something else too!)
| Janiqua chapter 15 . 10/26/2006
This is reminding me of Xena... Did you ever watch Xena as a kid? God, I haven't watched it in YEARS... This brings back memories...
Gabrielle had a daughter named Hope, who was the daughter of an evil god or something... and Gabrielle had to choose between Hope and Xena... Xena wanted to kill Hope because Hope was as evil as her father. Strange similarities...
| Janiqua chapter 13 . 10/26/2006
Okay, great story. Loved that Daniel's a Prior of the Others now. One problem.
Oma is fighting Anubis for all eternity. She can't be there with Daniel.
Daniel's got other Ascended friends that the writers of Stargate seem to have forgotten about. Everyone on Abydos was ascended. Instead of using Oma, why not use Skaara? Or even better! The Harcisis! Sha're's son!
| Janiqua chapter 8 . 10/26/2006
That's so sweet... Oh, you make me a happy person! Daniel did it to save Vala... (Sigh) I love Daniel...
| Janiqua chapter 7 . 10/26/2006
Naa... I don't buy it. There's no way Jack would have left. The others would have left, but Jack would have stayed behind for Daniel, Prior or not.
Good chapter! Loved to see Daniel on our side again! You're good at this. But Jack wouldn't have left Daniel behind...
| Janiqua chapter 5 . 10/26/2006
There you go. It's a deal. Good guy makes a deal with the bad guys. (Sigh)
What was the deal? Are the Ori going to hold up their end of the bargain? What was the deal? You gotta tell me. I'm dying here! Daniel made a deal? Was it worth it? Does Daniel even make deals? Yes, he's a diplomat, of COURSE he makes deals! But with the Ori? Oh, I'm really confused... WHAT WAS THE DEAL?
| Janiqua chapter 4 . 10/26/2006
Yeah! Daniel's not completely gone! Maybe he's undercover or something... Daniel's gotta have a plan, right? I mean... it's DANIEL!
| Janiqua chapter 3 . 10/26/2006
You know, if Jack had been there in the first place, this NEVER would have happened! DANIEL! Jack will get Daniel back for the team. I KNOW he will! Thank you for bringing Jack into this. His friendship with Daniel's one of my favorite parts of the show. He's gonna be pissed!
| Janiqua chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
If I review, will you respond? Okay, what to say... what to say... Your first chapter was too short. Okay? Too short. Fix it.
Okay, now that I've reviewed, we need to talk about Daniel! I read the spoiler that he becomes a Prior, and I haven't been able to sleep since! He CAN'T become a Prior! He knows better than anyone on Earth what the Ori are! This isn't fair! Not fair! Not fair! Not fair!
Do you have any thoeries? Well, of course you do! You're writing this fiction! I guess I should finish reading it then... Talk to you later!
| sapphirerosha110 chapter 13 . 9/23/2006
I like the whole Daniel-as-a-prior-of-the-good-ascended-guys, but you've overlooked one tiny detail from the end of season eight. Oma Desala is locked in eternal battle with Anubis to keep him from destroying the universe. It kind of puts a damper on this part of the plot, but other than that, it's a good story.
| half-human chapter 17 . 9/1/2006
OMGOODNESS!Daniel and VALA! WOOT WOOT! i love love love VALA! good way to end it.
| SailorNeo chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
Yes, I have fully panicked and freaked out. And you know what makes it worse? They were gonna (hopefully) make him human again in season 11...WHICH ISN'T GOING TO HAPPEN UNLESS SG-1 FINDS A NEW HOME! I hate Sci-Fi at the moment...