|Reviews for Deity|
| nocloudypooh chapter 10 . 10/16/2018
When i read something, I like to read through some of the reviews to help me put my thoughts of the stories into perspective, some organisation if you will. A reviewer mentioned that he/she doesn’t necessarily enjoyed reading this. And i agree, i don’t think it’s enjoyable in a fun or gripping way. It’s intriguing, morbid and it probably goes deeper than what any reader can get from it. The little parts of the stories that only the writer knows about.
Itachi’s attempt at suicide was interesting. Death by hypothermia in an urban area, it comes in a stark contrast to his criticism of suicide methods because they won’t effective or efficient enough. He was comfortable pointing out those flaws, while Shisui was uncomfortable hearing about them. Yet in the end, it was Shisui who found the courage to end life decisively, while Itachi didn’t.
Itachi’s fall from genius is odd? For lack of a better term. Because it’s difficult to go into the mindset of something like that, of someone whose brian still works ferociously but unable to express them in a satisfying manner. And i think it’s sad, the fall from genius. Whittling to an empty husk. Have you read Flowers for Algernon before? It’s been years, but I remember how uncomfortably upset i was at the story. Because it’s the sense of helplessness, of nothing that could have been done. Itachi here made me feel the same
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/29/2018
| KuroitsukiNoMai chapter 10 . 9/1/2016
Wow. That was so beautifully written - beautifully haunting, I guess. Thank you so much for sharing this! I absolutely loved it.
| I'mafangirlIcantbecontrolled chapter 10 . 4/19/2016
That was so beautifully agasty I loved it so much
| nana chapter 10 . 8/15/2015
that was...really dark. really confusing, sorta tumultous, but an enjoyed journey nonetheless. it...delves into psychology...and goes really...how to say, deep (?) into our psyche. It's mildly disturbing, but mostly just cynical. Very cynical, yet realistic at the same time.
I did enjoy it, by the way.
| TTTT chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
I'm so sad~~~~~~~~~~~ That was heartbreaking! Itachi, don't leave!
| LittleLunaChan chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
That was an unexpected heavy and dark story, though very well written and loaded with emotion. I don't know if I "enjoyed" reading it per se, I think "intrigued" is a better fitting word, but it was a very interesting read anyway. I think the dark and heavy setting was very consistent and a major point for the entire story, something I applaud you for keeping up in all the different scenarios and chapters. Though I think that Itachi was a bit too morbid for my liking, I do see where he's coming from in this setting, from his point of view. All together a very well written, intriguing, and memorable story.
| Arekkusu Naitofaia chapter 10 . 11/14/2014
Awww what a pretty fic. I love how well it's written, so very beautiful.
| LucieDeVil chapter 10 . 11/11/2014
Truly an intriguing story.A bit cynic,but that's what I liked the most about the usual:"life is so hard,but I must nit give up, I can make it" fic. What scared me was that I actually thought hard on some of the things mentioned in here and I found myself understanding it. It surely opened my eyes to another way of seeing it was beautiful,thank you for bringing this to readers...
| AlmostElectric chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
I think a good way to describe this fic is "morbid fascination". It carried a beautiful and deep moral message. I'm sorry I have little else to write here. But I think you probably know what a wonderful job you did.
| Makkura Arashi chapter 10 . 11/1/2013
Really beautiful story and extremely well-written. I'm usually a SasuNaru fan and find that I can't enjoy too many other pairings or read fics without pairings, but this fic is awesome!
I truly hope you keep writing!
| silverscribbles chapter 10 . 5/28/2013
Oh wow. The story was quite the journey. It disturbed me a little, but it was fascinating. Your writing style is amazing!
| drooly-puppy chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I'm being brought to freakin' tears just reading this first chapter goddamn
| flaming rose chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
I love this…so much…thank you so much!
| flaming rose chapter 9 . 2/2/2013