|Reviews for The Organoid Chronicles I: The Chosen Ones|
| Blackdragonpi chapter 9 . 9/30/2008
Just about all of the zoids you've mentioned couldn't stand up to a genosaurer except the Dibisons. The Arachnids would get torn apart by a rev raptor. Sane goes for a godos.
| Spiritheart chapter 12 . 11/7/2006
That was reslly good! I know that there is a sequel so I'll read that!
| Azure Ghidorah chapter 12 . 8/1/2006
DM02: ...Chaos Saurer. Fancy name for a fancy bad guy, err, I mean zoid, but one thing. To me, you made the Chaos Saurer /invincible/. What kind of fire power can take down a zoid who /regenerates/ by getting /damaged/? I'll tell you, no kind of fire power can pull that feat off.
Liger Zero: /Well, an Ultimate X or two that gains the ability to fire this Super Charged Particle Gun, in theory, could destroy the Death, I mean, Chaos Saurer in about three burts, in theory mind you./
DM02: Since when where you scientific about this kind of thing?
Beserk Fury: /Oh, I want to kill that thing so bad! I know I was evil but never THAT evil./
DM02: If I remember correctly, your not in the story.
Beserk Fury: /But I can wish, can't I?/
DM02: /sighs/ Great, am I the only one who is still sane?
Liger Zero: /No./
DM02: Oh by the way, Zero, what you suggested is IMPOSSIBLE! GENOSAURERS COULDN'T WITHSTAND THAT KIND OF POWER! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK THAT AN ULTIMATE X WILL HAVE DIFFERENT RESULTS!
Liger Zero: /Beserk Fury survived against three Charge Particle Guns simotaneously!/
DM02: Said attacks pale in comparison to Chaos Saurer's attack.
Liger Zero: /... I never took that into account, so with this information... DM02 is correct. It's hopeless! Chaos Saurer already won... Unless.../
DM02: Oh boy, what now?
Liger Zero: /What if the blasted the gun apart BEFORE he fired it?/
DM02: Chaos Saurer regenerates.
Liger Zero: /... Oh... Not good./
| angelinthewind001 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Very interesting !
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 12 . 7/16/2006
That's the best ending you could have done! Not what you expect, which is perfect becasue everything is far too cliche now-a-days.
My inner fan-girl wants a happy ending but this was the best way to insure a sequeal (sp?)
When Crow battled Craven and Crow lost I rejoyced. It was very cool. Like the "Battle for Survival" only reversed (You know the scene where Van blows up the Geno-Surarer)
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 11 . 7/15/2006
Damn that thing is strong...
Crow most certainly fits as leader for the paladins. I assume next chapter might be the finale?
I think next chapter I'll be supporting Craven and Crow, which could get messy, I can't help but love em' both!
This is a very fast paced fic but it works, you do what you do well and I think it's best to have a sequeal cause it just won't feel like you've wrapped it up completely (Plus I just want more Organoid Chronicles!)
I shall be waiting for the update and most certainly Chronicles II!
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 10 . 7/15/2006
Hey! Just about to read chapter 11 but first chapter 10!
I love Gabriel's catch fraze (?) "Time to dominate and obliterate!"
You have the paladins working very well together (And I don't just mean in the story) the chemistry you have going with them is comfortable and Juliet is no different to any other Zoid pilot which is refreshing (I knew you could write a chick with a good personality and no Sue qualities! _)
Anyway the battle feels very climax-y and you really feel like you're in the action. I have the same feeling in my gut reading this story that I did when watching the final episodes of Zoids CC
As always the part with Craven was brilliant (I love him too much, he's too cool) I always loved how the Death-Surarer had a spirit that minipulated its "pilots" and you really worked well with that.
(Off to chapter 11 I'll rant more there)
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 9 . 7/12/2006
The Choas Surarer is so awesome! (Poor Organoids! But Crow will resscue them surely)
I have to say I'm loving the dramatic evil plans un-fold and the way you write about all the thousands of zoids gathering as well as the organoid secen is just wonderful.
So the Peace Paladins huh? Like a new version of the GF. Their titles were very cool. Crow becoming Paladin of Vengence was brilliant!
Attack Arachs actually make alot of sense, I mean with low resources after the war the creation of a small tough zoid that didn't take much to mass produce was inevitable.
Anyway, can't wait for the big battle.
Frankly I don't know where all these damn reviewers are! (cowards...) I hope some show up soon, this is a good story. (And the teeth marks are already gone! Look! It only took 2 days)
Pitty I didn't pick up on Necros but I see it now, worth a guess right?
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 8 . 7/11/2006
You have been busy haven't you? I like the new title plus "Cronicles" signals more to come! _
Very cool, the final battle (At least for this section) seems to be starting and Evolution Zoids pitted against each other always fun.
Thank you hugely for the begining! I know the effort that goes into adding something that you never origionally intended.
As always good work!
Ps (I don't know why the average review count for Zoids Fan-Fiction is so low, some things that would get at least 300 reviews in another section only gets like 60 here. It's annoying)
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 7 . 7/9/2006
Whoa! Hold on- "Chosen OneS" pulural? Oh dear...
YAY Colonel Payne lives! Necros was a good choice of name and the Psychosuarer is very cool.
I can't wait for the battle scene between Crow and Craven, that is so going to kick ass! (I can forgive you for the evil cliffy if you update as soon as possible)
The plot to evolve the Death-Saurer is something I never saw coming but I like it! _ All the destruction that thing could cause would be incredible!
But I keep thinking- "Who is Necros in the public eye? Who on Zi has these kinds of resources?" I mean Prozen was evil incarnate but to the people of the empire he seemed like a good guy (until he blew up their capital)
Man...Now I must discover who the other Chosen oragnoids are and I wonder if Scar is going to show up.
Very Good chapter!
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 6 . 7/8/2006
No not colonel Payne! When Craven just let them cuff him I'm sitting here thinking- WTF? But then it all made sense...
One kickass battle at the end! I could see it in my head clearly and it was cool.
Wow. So the stealth viper is going to evolve but into what? *ponders*
It seems like this part of the story is coming to a climax (what with the craven and crow evolution battle coming up) but I can tell there is so much more trouble to come! I suspect perhaps Craven will do a Raven and dissapear for a while? But not after getting his tail-pipe kicked!
I love it that in your chapters I can see similarities to the episodes from seasons CC/GF
Craven getting caught reminded me of- Ep 47 "A Monster Awakens"
Drake running off before they could defeat Craven- Ep 44 "Assault of the Mega-Monster"
(I own all the DVDs I've seem those eps like 200 times)
Very clever/good chapter. Update soon! _
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 5 . 7/7/2006
Damn! I can't figure out which one is Hilts/Reese! Congrads for keeping me guessing, it makes it more enjoyable.
I have a Dark Spinner model, those things really are kickass and all this fire power is making me drool. Ah, the joys of mass destruction.
Scar sounds alright, but I just don't trust him for some reason (Maybe I will later on). Anyway, did you create the Whitz Wolf?Or have I just not heard of it before?
Seems Rex is still causing trouble, and I'm assuming if these guys have a whale king they have to have connections in high places...
I think the best thing in this fiction is the mystery. The whole thing keeps you guessing and you want to figure it out.
_ Update Soon.
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 4 . 7/4/2006
(lol) I never understood how they came up with ranks in the amry I mean- "Private" and "Major"? It's enough to give you some very bad mental images.
(You know in the first matrix when they explain to Neo what the Matrix is? Listen to some of those speeches and think Porno Film. I nealy died laughing)
And When I heard- "Rex!" I kind of figured it wasn't Craven. I'm guessing however Craven will get an organoid, and if we have a Prozen/Raven figure are we going to encounter a Reese or Hilts like character?
To bad about Sulivan, he was cool. Nice chappy I loved the gore at the end. Freaky Zombie dudes are fun.
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 3 . 7/4/2006
Is it just me or does it seem like someone in the empire is always planning something evil! The plot thickens...
Again good battle, the charged particle discriptions were really good and when I read that the Geno Suarer had shown up, my first words were- "Oh Shit!"
Glad to know you update a lot, I hope we find out more about Craven/Craven's boss soon.
| Vanya-Deyja chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
hmm...The people of Zi have always been caught up in legends, nicely done with the white stealth viper story.
I really like your battle scenes too, it's hard to write about two or more gaint metal monsters going at it without making it sound akward.
Update soon! I want more Craven!