|Reviews for Breakdown|
| Cainchan chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
woow really emotional first chapter. I loved it. Poor sam, the kid's condition must be really bad. His fragile mind was destroyed by jessicas death and the nightmares must be aweful. Sam gets weaker and more fragile/skinny when the days went on, poor boy; (despite I like this plot where much. yeah skinny!traumatized!sam with nightmares yeah - thank you for this story)
| JustCause chapter 12 . 8/27/2008
I really liked this story! I'm not sure Sam would actually suffer a breakdown like this-he seems to be a very strong individual (even if emo at times) but I loved the brotherly bonding that occured because of it. Thanks so much!
| Izzy4 chapter 12 . 5/29/2007
I've come to this late but I enjoyed it. Strong OCs and a really good, well thought out, storyline.
| heather03nmg chapter 12 . 5/4/2007
Wow, those were some heavy, angst filled chapters.
I loved the story, it was very dark at times, Sam has a lot of pain and guilt over the losses in his life and watching him self-destruct was difficult.
Dean did such an amazing job taking care of Sammy, you write their brotherly love so beautifully.
Awesome story, sick Dean was a nice bonus!
| Poaetpainter chapter 12 . 4/8/2007
| Supernatural fanfiction Awards chapter 12 . 3/1/2007
I'm just leaving you this message to inform you that you've won an award for this fic at Supernatural Fanfiction Awards
If you'd like to pick it up, it will be posted under "Winners".
| rue37 chapter 12 . 2/28/2007
Nice story. I like your style; not over the top, but understated, leaving some details to the imagination. That strengthens the story, and the characters as well. Bravo!
| Jennygeee chapter 12 . 2/3/2007
Loved this story! I read it because I'm reading your new one “The Hunt”, I’m enjoying it and saw in the summary that there would be references to “Breakdown”. I’m glad I did because I now know a little more about Kristine and Patrick and loved the way that Sam needed Dean so much, we see how much Dean needs Sam and doesn’t want him to leave but it was nice to read something that showed it the other way around.
“Dean padded across the room and sat down across from Sam” – That just conjures up such an appealing image in my mind!
“I adore you, Dean Winchester.” she whispered. “What’s not to adore?”- So true, what is there not to adore about Dean Winchester!
I'm going back to read your new chapter of "The Hunt" now.
| surveygrrlyahoo.com chapter 12 . 1/10/2007
nice story, very well done! i enjoyed the sam!angst.
| hum chapter 2 . 11/20/2006
was a really great story till you added the girl
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 12 . 7/31/2006
And my name in lights! Glad to help, dear : ) Good ending. I didn’t get tired of Patrick and Kristine – they were great. And your John Winchester is one I definitely could come to like. Sad to see this one end! Nice work.
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 11 . 7/31/2006
Sammy, Sammy, Sammy. And our poor sick Dean, still being the big brother. I loved the whole “Make Sam eat” thing! And Papa Bear arrives! Hm… Good work!
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 10 . 7/31/2006
You’re really trying to get me over be anti-John-ness aren’t you? That little clip at the end helped : ) Loved this:
but you’re not driving and I’m tired of standing in the rain. Back or shotgun, Winchester?”
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 9 . 7/31/2006
Oh, poor, poor, Sammy – have you spoken to Faye about the Limp!Sam club? I swear you’d fit right in : ) Good stuff.
| pmsdevil01 chapter 12 . 7/27/2006
i really liked that story. a sequel would be cool.