Reviews for Living Behind a Mask
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
More paragraphing would make this easier to read... Also is this first person or third.
Taiki no Hitsuzen Kage chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
The way you wrote is perfection. Your plot is bad though. Great writing, bad premise. No offense, but you could use your writing skills for something better.
gow the geust chapter 13 . 9/23/2017
very good i thought it would be boring for so little chaps but u proofed me wrong u have my respeck
BlankCanvas624 chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
Um... sorry if this seems like flames but I thought the Kyuubi secret was S rank? I don't think the Hokage would tell Naruto about it after guarded it for so long... but I really like the idea
Average Joh chapter 3 . 6/24/2017
I'm so does Naruto know that he will fight Orochimaru... I don't think Kyubii would be able to know all this and tell him
Guest chapter 6 . 6/18/2017
i love the story, but why arashi!? its minato
WFA chapter 4 . 4/29/2017
I love the story so far.

As I am a first time reader, I do sincerely hope that it continues this way as I do enjoy the plot and concepts immensely. Thank you for your dedication in writing this. :D
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
No...just no...naruto would never do that no matter what version of him u can make
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
love naruto and sasuke's bond in this, its just like the anime but deeper...great fic and you're an amazing writer
johnrlozada chapter 13 . 1/4/2017
Three words: I love it
fallkid19 chapter 2 . 1/4/2017
this is a big naruto and sasuke pity party
johnrlozada chapter 2 . 1/4/2017
I fucking loved thus chapter. That murder scene was awesome. I was worried he won't kill Haku. I'm glad he did.
Daddymoopoo chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
I really enjoy the storyline that's taking shape, but the big blocky paragraphs that exist hurt my eyes and make me lose track of where I was whenever I start to really think on what could or is happening. I'd recommend spacing paragraphs out every four or five lines, just to make it a little easier on the eyes. Good work otherwise.
Raijin104 chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
Has there been a fanfic where naruto eyes get damaged and he gets the sharigan
wnaruto616 chapter 13 . 8/10/2016
you have to continue this this was a great story
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