Reviews for Metronome
Lord Darling chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Compelling - a stream-of-consciousness piece that intriguingly gives voice to the fractured psychology of the characters. Bloody well done. What an ear for the language you have!
Lise Steiner chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
This is fantastic. I read the beggining four times and it still amazes me.
IceSnowAndGlamour chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I really thought this read like prose, with the random thoughts (My eyes are prettier, always second best...) mixed with the narration. Cool story.

(If he's not trying, surely he'll succeed.)

That part I found the most interesting. "Try try again..."
Decollage chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
That is some spectacular imagry- very poetic prose. I think you really did pin down a little piece of Eugene, and did it beautifully.