Reviews for Secrets and Shinobi
lucien.francine chapter 5 . 4/3/2016
More chapter please
Sabaku No Kaori chapter 5 . 11/13/2012
pppppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeee eaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeeee update!
izzy1229anime chapter 5 . 9/24/2011
Continue this story! Please! I love it!
NaruSasufan125 chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
Omg this can't be it please hurry with more I'm so wanting too see more please
yaoiluvr4lif chapter 5 . 6/12/2010

I don't believe I have ever reviewed this story yet so here I go.

Well I must say I love this story, I read it the first time like years ago and stumbled across it just now -lol- how weird. Anyway I do believe you shall either update on this story OR write another one of your lovely stories for your loyal fans if you may.
TehAwesomeHero chapter 5 . 7/29/2009
I LOVE THIS! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon! _





...Heh. I'm an idiot.
rintisku chapter 5 . 6/16/2008
okay you have to finish this one soon i really like it. it is far better than the darbbles i can't wait to find out why they have problems with the secret, i think i might know why since the son naruto has i think has sasuka's powers but ya can't wait to read next chapter
Luna Tsuki SilverMoon chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
Tsuki is another name mine...
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 5 . 4/17/2008
Nice story!
Pineapplecat chapter 5 . 3/25/2008
I'm so glad you updated! It's looking good! I can't wait for more chapters...
Nagini125 chapter 5 . 3/24/2008
Good story. Im looking forward to finding out what happened to sasuke and naruto. Thanks
Dragon77 chapter 5 . 3/24/2008
Grate chapter! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Rotten Glee chapter 5 . 11/16/2007
Hehe. Hi. Yea, me again. Just dropped another review to point something I really feel I should (and to up the number of your reviews... XD); honorifics such as -sensei, -chan, or -kun or -san are not capital letters (this includes 'nee-chan'; the 'n' in nee isn't capital). They don't have '-' either at the ends of a name necessarily (some Japanese don't put the '-' when they write in romaji), but they DEFINITELY are not in capital letters. I'm not flaming, so please don't be angry. I'm just telling you. Don't take it the wrong way, kay? Anywho, once more, good luck. , Jaa!

Rotten Glee chapter 6 . 11/16/2007
*squeals and glomps you* Oh. My. God! *squeals again* This was just so terrifyingly cute and interesting that it made me want to strangle you for stopping it there! XP Kidding. Strangling authors is not a good thing... Anyway, this is a very interesting fic, not to mention your portrayal of the couples and their children is just undeniably enchanting. Usually, I don't look twice at OC kids (can't be bothered to read about kids... XD) in fics, but yours just made me go gaga.

And gods, how could you skip Sasuke's team's entrance like that? *growls* From what's in the fifth chapter, Sasuke seems really OOC (as in, he acted a LOT like Kakashi, from what his team were complaining... XD), but I don't mind, though I was disappointed at not being able to read him out as such. *cries* How could you deprive readers of such great Sasuke-ness! ;P Lolz... Well, anywho, your writing is quite good, but you tend to miss out a few words in some sentences. I suggest you get someone to beta-read for you, but that's just a suggestion.

, On a side note, Neji DOES seem OOC, but then again, after going through MPreg, who wouldn't be, ne (take Sasuke, for example... I think Hikaru's lucky a certain ex-emo ninja doesn't read Icha Icha *cough*yet*cough*. XD)? He seems to be PMS-ing a lot...*runs to hide from an enraged Hyuuga*

*comes back panting and looking nervously over shoulder* And about the chuunin exams... Hm... Hows about you get them to do something dangerous in Suna? Or some other country (like Tsuchi or even Oto? I mean, if they went to Oto, then the shock (or fear, whatever it is that might be encountered) may add to the painful and dangerous way the kids find out about their parentage?). Dangerous how, that's another question altogether. You could bring in old enemies or new ones that descended from them... XD That sounded so funny out loud...

*clears throat* Ahem. Anyways, here! *hands you a tub of cookies 'n' cream ice cream* That's wishing you good luck on the next chapter (which I'm hoping will be coming soon...). Looking forward to your next update! Jaa!

Baby Bitch chapter 6 . 12/30/2006
nice job update ok?
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