|Reviews for The Deal|
| SonyaT.Blade chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
It could have used a more in depth smut scene. but cute, in a cliched and predictable sort of way, I guess.
| ImFearless chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
aw that was so sweet, i loved it! :)
| kcdancer chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
that was so cool! definitely a favorite
| Tahti chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
This was so intense! I was on the verge of tears more than once, and I'm so glad that you gave them a happy ending, cause I didn't really see it coming (blame my moroseness over THE dreary promos). Wish the Others showed a little heart like you made them, in the show.
I loved the smut, it was incredibly emotional, you managed to mingle sex and love beautifully, like it should be, and thus capture the "cosmic connection" Jack & Kate have, on every single level.
Outstanding story, and I wish you write many more *sighs*, and thank you for this one!
| pickmysong -was Kate108 chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Aw... That is a beautiful story.
| Svnh chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
all i can say is wow !
“Don’t make me promise to love again when I know I can’t” this story is amazing and i've loved this sentence, the best moment to my mind.
you're very good at smutty stories, aren't you ?
i read broken memories too and i was waiting for the moment he'll rememeber their night together and they'll making love, and i have to say that i wasn't disappointed...
| Luluz chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Aw i thought i commented here. I read this a while ago when i was notified and i was sure i commented but it looks like i didn't so...AWESOME FIC! I love your writing you are so the smut queen!
| FoxBlues chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
ur writing is absolutely amazing! awesome one shot! great job
| ameriker chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
GREAT story! I loved it! And loved them together!
| EternalConfusion chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Aw, YAY! I'm so glad they ended up together and happy and aww lil' kiddies! :D I love this, aww...again you stirred up my emotions with this one. Aww. hehe. Your writing is just :O legendary! Seriously, amazing stuff! Keep it up...
| 1LostFan chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Wow what a cool ending! I like this one a lot. Great job!
| SonicH2O chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
kool didn't know you took request...
| MissFantabulous chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Ooh. Great job :D
| jaterfate chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
i loved it. you need to make a sequal. with what happened after kate got pregnant
| Suliet-Is-Love chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Cute. That would make a good epsiode. Like if the others drugged them and they started to hallcuinate* things.