Reviews for His Last Breath
jily fan chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
oh my merlin! this acctually made me cry! this is so beautifull and so sad, i love it, its perfect!
Golden Phoenix42 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Oh, that's so sweet! And also incredibly sad too...

It's too bad that James and Lily had to die, but I guess there wouldn't be any Harry Potter books if it weren't for their sacrifice...


Anyway, great fic!

Write more soon,

Golden Phoenix
l1lyfl0w3r chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Aww, sad...but good. Poor James...It always makes me sad reading stories 'bout Harry with his parents as a baby 'cause he never got to know them..though, not once has a stories on Fanficiont made me cry..that is something I want to read a sad story that makes me cry..isn't hasn't happened yet though I'm sure one day it will...
Snow-Leopard-Patronus chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
AW This was so sweet. I know you from I'm snow_leopard_patronus Y'know? Sweet fic. You're a very good writer!

Asian Portia chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
thats pretty good - but i think you need to add to it a bit.
Miss Apple Pie chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I like it! Almost cryed...
siruisblack18 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow I loved that, especially how James faced Voldemort, thats just how I think of James! Write more soon
rurouni madness-battousai obsession chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
I loved it so much! It was so sad! Excellent job! I'll go and read your other fic! If it's as good as this one I'm sure that I'll review it!

and-chaos-reigned chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
oh, that was so depressing! but very well-written; it made me want to cry. you did the ending very well without making it mushy though. ) good job!
RazberryGirl chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
omg that is so sad. it made me cry! T_T but great job, it's well written!
Hnz786 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
this was great . please keep writing because this almost made me cry
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Wow! This was really good. Keep up the great work!
ProngsxLilyflower chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Aww... so sweet...
gnomex chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Good GGx