|Reviews for His Last Breath|
| jily fan chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
oh my merlin! this acctually made me cry! this is so beautifull and so sad, i love it, its perfect!
| Golden Phoenix42 chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Oh, that's so sweet! And also incredibly sad too...
It's too bad that James and Lily had to die, but I guess there wouldn't be any Harry Potter books if it weren't for their sacrifice...
Anyway, great fic!
Write more soon,
| l1lyfl0w3r chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Aww, sad...but good. Poor James...It always makes me sad reading stories 'bout Harry with his parents as a baby 'cause he never got to know them..though, not once has a stories on Fanficiont made me cry..that is something I want to happen..to read a sad story that makes me cry..isn't hasn't happened yet though I'm sure one day it will...
| Snow-Leopard-Patronus chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
AW This was so sweet. I know you from I'm snow_leopard_patronus Y'know? Sweet fic. You're a very good writer!
| Asian Portia chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
thats pretty good - but i think you need to add to it a bit.
| Miss Apple Pie chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
I like it! Almost cryed...
| siruisblack18 chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Wow I loved that, especially how James faced Voldemort, thats just how I think of James! Write more soon
| rurouni madness-battousai obsession chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
I loved it so much! It was so sad! Excellent job! I'll go and read your other fic! If it's as good as this one I'm sure that I'll review it!
| and-chaos-reigned chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
oh, that was so depressing! but very well-written; it made me want to cry. you did the ending very well without making it mushy though. ) good job!
| RazberryGirl chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
omg that is so sad. it made me cry! T_T but great job, it's well written!
| Hnz786 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
this was great . please keep writing because this almost made me cry
| 100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Wow! This was really good. Keep up the great work!
| ProngsxLilyflower chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
Aww... so sweet...
| gnomex chapter 1 . 7/3/2006