|Reviews for Two Left Feet|
| Thaddeus Halstead chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
And it was good.
The present tense gives it a feeling of urgence, as if there is little time to spare. Wondeful.
| Omnicat chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
The same thing here; I read your fic, I read the original chapter from the book, and I'm confused about how you wrote this. And as I said about your other story, these two chapters seem to have been written and posted in quite a hurry; sentences are cut off in the wrong places, run-on sentences, letters of words missing or double... You might want to check all these stories for this phenomenon.
| Omnicat chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Hm... I have the original passage from the book open in my lap, and this is... confusing. Are you presenting a different version of reality, or something?