Reviews for A Hole In The World
X.summergrey.X chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
wow. just wow. actually thats a good ending for it. its not some mircle crap that she came back, its just what happens in life kind of thing. not every situation has a happy ending.
ddproxcm chapter 5 . 10/15/2009
I love a tragic, yet slightly hopeful, ending. I loved this story and have no idea why it didn't get any more reviews than this. It was well written and to me, personally, the plot was very original. The scenes between Robin and Starfire weren't sappy and over cliche and I loved how you actually had him stay with her instead of feeling the need to be proactive.
marietta chapter 3 . 4/22/2008
I just wanted to say that the descriptive writing in your story is good, but as you said at the beginning, the dialogue is almost completley from Angel, whithout even names like Illyria changed. To anyone who has seen Angel, this is a bit irritating. good job, but I would say to just try and vary plot and dialgoue a little, but I really enjoyed it!
RoseXxxXThorn chapter 5 . 7/19/2007
This was a TOTALLY AMAZING story! I really, really love it. Is this the end? Or are you going to write a sequel? I hope you do! :D

Write soon!

Love,

Rose.
a rose by any other name71591 chapter 5 . 5/13/2007
Aww this was really sad, the part where Robin fell down and cried, that made me CRY! I hope you update soon!
Silent Soul Ken -SSK chapter 5 . 4/12/2007
Wow... Just... Wow... Hey is it finished or is there more?
Violet Rave chapter 5 . 1/5/2007
If you do not make a sequel soon, there is a great possibilty that I will hunt you down and MAKE you!

Melantha The Dark
Silent Scope chapter 5 . 12/31/2006
I really loved this episode of Angel. And I loved this story. I like the little hint you dropped that Raven may be able to restore Starfire back to life. That is a proven fact in the Teen Titans comics that Raven can bring a person's body back and restore their soul to their body. If you write a sequel to this, keep that in mind. Still, great story!

Silent Scope signing off
Psychotol chapter 4 . 10/29/2006
This is an interesting plot idea.

Unfortunately it feels a bit forced (especially Terra's connections with Jinx and Raven calling around for mystical assistance and Robin's conversation with that cop that wanted to draw the Titan's ettention to somethign else that was going on), the way you tried to make this plot line near identical to the Angel plot, I get the urge to do that, but if it's too identical, then it gets boring in most places and jarrs like if you try to force an AIM9 onto an LAU-132 in others.

Still, it's a pretty good fic if the reader's barely fammiliar with Angel, all this will be new to you.

Otherwise, ... sorry.
Green Gallant chapter 5 . 9/29/2006
That was a good ending, I wasnt really expecting that. It was sad, but it was good. The way you left it off, will there be a sequal? The return of Starfire, perhaps?

By the way, thanks for mentioning me in the author's note. Write me back when you get this. And in the later chapters it seemed like "M" was a more appropriate rating. So thank you for that. It was a tragically good Titans story, my heart was breaking at times when I read this story. You did so well on this story, I couldnt believe what was happening most of the time.
Vikkistar95 chapter 4 . 9/18/2006
Loved it sad though *claps wildly than goes to a corner and sops*
yuuram chapter 5 . 9/9/2006
i loved everything

BUT STARFIRE DIED

i am crying

i am seriously crying, my chest hurts and i have been weeping since chapter 3!

although this story is brilliant and amazing

I HATE YOUR ENDING

robin should of commited suicide and then ended with her

or they die together

or he go mad and her pressence remain in his head talking, calming his soul in his insanity

or she just not die

OR HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER WHERE HE GIVES HALF OF HIS SOUL FOR STARFIRE TO COME BACK!

yaya

PLZ CHANGE THIS OR ADD AN EPILOGUE!

this is too sad and too fustrating!
Elissar chapter 5 . 9/7/2006
god, that is so harsh...good job though, really good.
Green Gallant chapter 4 . 8/26/2006
Wow...that was really something. A lot of things in this chapter I didnt expect. Robin seemed strangely out of character in this chapter. Its like he's a whole nother person, I would probably be the same way if the girl I loved was gone. There are a few things in this chapter that really suprised me. Robin stabbing Terra. For a second I thought you really killed her. It just doenst seem like Robin would do inspite of what she had done. And where they started using guns, that was unexpected too. I noticed the change in direction in the story. Things are getting a lot more serious. Well, I like to see how this story ends. Good work on this chapter, very twisted. So unlike the rating. Actually this would probably be more like the comic books And could you please write a reply to my review?
Elissar chapter 4 . 8/26/2006
Nice, I really like their interactions with each other, very good. I was hoping maybe you had found a way to have her find the army intact but oh well, still good.
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